i met this man when i was young. he filled my heart with so much feeling and happiness, i thought i might burst,1
he is to this day, the most increduble guy in this world, in this universe, in my lifetime.2
we were both young and extaticly happy people.we were just in seventh grade.3
we met at school, in vancouver b.c. i went every where with him.4
we were so in love. we thought we would be together forever. people tryed to say that we were to young to really know what love felt like, or what what it really was, and ment.5
we didn't care. we thought they were wrong in every way.we talked every night, everyday was spent in each others company.6
we felt like the luckiest people in the world. we danced, kissed, walked, talked and everything else.7
we talked of having family's of our own.8
when i was around him i thought i was so in love that i was crazy with it.i saw fireworks explode in mind when we kissed, when we danced i melted into his arms, when we talked his voice was music to my ears, it would gentley sing me to sleep every night. when we walked to the park one day it happened. he proposed.9
he got down on one knee in the middle of a crowded stanely park. it was the most beautiful park i had ever seen. anyway, he got down on one knee, and said" will you marry me, be with me forever", i was so shocked in a good way that i couldnt help but cry out " yes,yes i will marry you".10
with just a look of his eyes into mine, i knew i love was what he was saying, i knew we would always be together. forever, and always.11
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this is a story of my grandma's first love, i made up some of it but it still works for me, and if i read this to her i hope she like's it.
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You have no idea what the hell went on between us!!! So before you jump down my throat, try listening to what everybody has to say! I don't care about Melyssa, I don't care if she hurts because of me. I felt hurt for a while too! What the hell am I telling you this for, you don't give a shit anyway.
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Wow that is sweet. It would be great to be able to meet your true love...but personally I'd want to live my high school years without such a commitment before settling down. Anyways, there are a couple of grammatical errors, but other than that it is a great story.
