The Matt and Andy show
Episode two- series two
Written by Jane Eagle
I ran the shower, hoping inside after stripping bare of my wet clothes. The water trickled down my cold body, warming me up as I had began to shiver.
The Bathroom smelt like perfume and after shave, unlike my parents cleaning product bathroom stench, along with the hot water, the smell was kind of trippy an made me close my eyes.
I could hear Jim in the Bedroom closing the door . I opened my eyes, watching him walk slowly into the bathroom, locking the door behind him. He smiled "Your a good girl Lauren, such a good girl".
He took of his shirt, revealing a surprisingly toned chest and unbuckled his belt , pulling of his pants, his erect cock heading in my direction.
I blinked, it was so freaking huge, not to mention long, I had heard about men's cocks being big and all but I had never imagined it to be this big.
My pussy tingled ,how the fuck was that gonna fit in my tiny little teenage pussy hole ?
He hoped in the shower, pulling the curtain across, and pushed his fingers into my moist pussy, deep, rubbing hard.
"Does that feel good Lauren , I'm just making it a little easier for you sexy little cunt to fit my huge cock into".
I nodded, closing my eyes and let my head fall to the side, holding my breath, holding the pleasure as he moved his head towards my breast.
"I think you need to be all nice and clean for when Sandra gets home".
I nodded, not wanting him to stop, he rubbed my clit frantically almost letting me have it before he slowly pulled his fingers out, leaving me in deep craving.
I watched as he grabbed the washer, soaping it up. He smiled as the hot water continued to trickle down my body, slowly seeping into my hole. He moved the washer across my shoulders, holding me still with his hands, running the soapy water all over me, tracing my shoulders, over my breast and caressed my stomach.
I held my breath as he ran the washer over my pussy, rubbing it softly against my skin, he open my pussy lips and rubbed my clit, slowly he moved it over my ass and dropped it to the ground. He placed his hand on my shoulders "Your all wet now aren't you Lauren" he said, I could tell he was ready for it to.
I nodded "Yes Jim , I'm so wet, my pussy needs you".
"This might hurt for a bit, cause your not used to being stretched so far, but it should feel good after a little while". He gave me a second, looking deep into my eyes, before he slowly pushed himself into me.
He was right, it stretched me so far it killed, it pained as he pushed himself slowly in and out.
"You alright" he asked holding my face in his hands, as tears trickled down my face "You'd tell me if it was to painfull wouldn't you, I don't want to hurt you, or push it to hard".
I shook my head "Fuck me hard Jim, I wanna feel you come inside me, hard".
He searched my eyes, wiping my tears and nodded "If it's what you want" he whispered as he pushed his cock harder and faster into me, kissing my neck.
I had my hands by my side, fighting the urge to stick my fingers inside his ass.
He grabbed my hands as if he already knew what I was thinking and placed them on his ass, we both looked at one another and smiled as we squeezed together,
"Your so fucking sexy Lauren I wanna fuck you tiny little ass so hard" Jim whispered in my ear, biting my lobe, as I began to force his body as hard as it could go, moving with his every move.
"Yes I know I am" I cried swallowing back tears as his tongue embarrassed my nipples, he bit on them lightly causing the throbbing in my pussy to increase, I was gonna come.
Outside I head a loud bang, and I could hear Sandra's voice, I pushed Jim back softly and tried to listen, hoping it wasn't just my imagination.
Jim must have heard it to , he started at me, panic in his eyes as he slowly pulled out of me and kissed me on the lips.
He let go of my shoulders, stepping out of the bath and threw me a towel "Quick run into sandra's room and find some clothes , any clothes and put them on, I'm gonna stay up here and continue to have my shower".
I nodded, feeling a little used.
He smiled "Next time your over here Lauren, don't worry it doesn't have to end here".
I smiled kissing Jim hard, rubbing his cock a little before I unlocked the door and ran into Sanrda's room.
It was fine, the feeling, different, heavy and hard, but I wasn't to worried after all I knew That somehow, sometime tonight I was getting laid and besides if my dreams come true I'd have the next best cock to Jim's.
Author notes
Hope you guys enjoy episode two !!!
Love Blair xoxo
A contest entry
- Turn me on (re-opened) by Points Of View.
280 points, ended December 18, 2007, 20 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Honest OPINIONS
Comments
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mmmmmmm
mmmm yummy but i can't wait for more of sandra and lauren
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I think I held my breath throughout the entire story. It was compelling, if you could call it that. I liked the dialogue because sometimes you don't find any in an erotic piece or the conversations are quite lame. Good luck in the contest.
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i loved it
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very very descriptive and the imagery was... well, it was FUCKING AWESOME. the way you dscribed the bathroom itself was actually really good, and the rest of teh story was too.
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Amazing. It is very passionate and visual. I can't wait for episode 3 to find out what happens next. Great job.
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I thought this was a bit over the top, Blair. I think the grammar has improved a bit recently, but as you should know about me, I don't really like the whole a lot older guy and teenage girl thing. But I still think that it was really well written.
Keep up the great work, Blair! I look forward to more stories of yours, buddy! -
:O
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erm wow giant odd fucking story XD very very good tho
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i want episode 3!!!!!
i love this story, its so awesome.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
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Luved it
I loved it can't wait for the next one keep it up there fucking amazing.....
an Lauren w/ jim hehe it's gettin very steamy----an i like it
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do you REALLY want my honest opinion?
ooooh, honest opinions hmmm?
well, it was interesting... haha, obviously, im not into this whole kind of, you know, straight full on hardcore stuff
it was good, good description... i mean hell, you really need good description of everything otherwise your readers wont get turned on by it, am i right?
lol
good work, but i dont see what the title has got to do with the story... a bit confusing, but it might be something from the first part i missed lol
anyways, good on ya
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luv u blair wif all my life not house lol
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i luv u blair wif all my house
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you such a silly coot- fine i'll write you a story bout me and u if it means U'll stop saying im crap ha ha ....
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it wasnt bad
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the characters r crap me and u would have been better lol
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