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Love is weird1

Love is odd2

Love is random3

Love is unpossible4

Love is immasterable5

Love is loud6

Love is never sad7

Love is always happy8

Love is unique9

Love is mine10

Love is yours11

Love is me12

Love is you13

Love is snazzy14

Love is Jazzy.

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  • YourPinUpDoll
    February 28, 2008

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    first I will say "AMEN" to that.... second I wish i could have put that into spoken word to one of my friends he just doesnt get it... Thirdsies How do you make the little arrows to keep just in case of urgency??


  • Ninja Bubble
    January 29, 2008
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    I loved this poem! WqaiI wrote it.... Oh well!


  • TheBlueRoad
    January 29, 2008

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    Like the last two sentences!!! This piece of writing has a great personality. It OWNS this!!! You rock. Keep on making more poems!


  • forevermyangel14
    January 19, 2008
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    hehe! i like the title xD randomm!!


  • UnicornGargoyle
    December 3, 2007
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    Amusement :p

    It was cute.

    Except: "Love is never sad"...try dating a temperamental sailor ;p


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    October 26, 2007

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    Cute. What's with the tittle? The peom seamed like something you'd find in a really funny valintines card.


  • Felissa
    October 26, 2007

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    Love can be so many different things, and you show that pretty well with just a few words. Pretty good.
    Yeah, I don't get the title either. Might help to explain that one.


  • Midnight-Engaged
    October 26, 2007

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    This was cute in it's own way, I will agree with that. But I don't understand the title, and really don't want to think on it too hard for fear that there isn't anything to understand.


  • plurangel silver member
    October 24, 2007
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    very cute im sure she loved this.


  • karmaxandxcrayons
    October 23, 2007

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    Aw, it's so CUTE!! But the one thing: it's not "unpossible", it's "IMpossible". Sorry, but I love the idea!! It made me smile even though I'm so tired I could die right now!!

    • Ninja Bubble
      October 23, 2007
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      yes i know i purposly did that though for irony(im probobly not using the word irony rite) as i also know its UNmasterable not IMmasterable.i switched the Un and Im in the words,get it? twas a joke.

      • karmaxandxcrayons
        October 23, 2007
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        ....
        Sorry that I'm so naive. (ahh i bet i spelled that wrong!!) Well anyway... I think I'm gonna sleep now.... so bye....
        xoxoxo,
        Maureen
        PS: haha. I forgot to laugh at your cool joke. haha.


  • NotTheDroids
    October 23, 2007
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    You missed out a few:
    Love is torture
    Love is pain
    Love can kill the heart inside
    Love is tears

  • plurangel silver member
    October 20, 2007

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    first of all: unpossible isn't a word, it's IMpossible. this is a very rewarding poem. i liked the repitition in this poem. unfortunately i do think you're writing this poem from a puppy love status. it started out well, but it faded from the real love to puppy love status when you wrote love is never sad, cause in reality love is healer of all wounds but sometimes love is what created those wounds. furthermore i liked this poem for its essential innocence. puppy love is the cutest thing in the world thank you for the entering my contest

    • Ninja Bubble
      October 23, 2007
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      yes i know i was kinda tryin to describe all the aspects of my gf while saying "love is" but i then ran out of stuff about her.


  • hiGh-on-happYness
    October 19, 2007
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    I must agree with kokaze


  • Kokaze
    October 18, 2007

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    Please, I don't mean any offense by this, but it doesn't seem like a lot of effort went into this. And in any case, you repeat yourself a couple of times.


    • Ninja Bubble
      October 18, 2007
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      i kinda did that on sum level of purpose but its just a love poem.


  • Oblivion Kitty God silver member
    October 18, 2007

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    A very pretty little piece. I like poems and this one is one that's easy to like. The spelling and grammar are perfect and the flow - perhaps more important in a poem than a story - is excellent. Good job on it and good luck in your contests.


  • demon-kun
    October 16, 2007
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    awsome it was kinda sad but awsomekeep up the good work


    • Ninja Bubble
      October 18, 2007
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      its not sad its a lovey dovey feel good poem! how can it be sad?


  • Miss Hanako Cullen
    October 15, 2007

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    Cute

    Very cute..but um..what Category does this fall under? And what's your username? All rules for the contest. : )
    Very good poem, will thouroughly rate when the rules are followed.
    Thanks


  • Taboo Pixie
    October 14, 2007
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    Lol...I have a serious case of 'the giggles' right now. This so cute and funny I loved great job.


  • My-Name-Is-Nobody
    October 14, 2007

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    Awwwww, that is soo good, Z. I love it and I love you. Thank you so much hun! I loved it ^-^ XD XD XD

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