he was in her computer1
at her work 2
in her house3
he crept in her under wear drawer4
Jason knew everything about her5
he was a bit creepy6
about a few year back7
Jason was on line8
messing with his computer9
when he stumble into her computer10
what he found was this girl11
who seem very naive12
very loud and out going13
so he stayed there14
hacked into all her files15
stole her picture from her PC16
messed with her setting and17
pinged her ip address18
Jason decided after he directly19
ran and rerouted her computer to his that she was the one for him20
she had this web cam21
that she would use to chat with her friends back home22
or guys she was interested in23
Jason found a way to access it all the time with out her knowledges of it24
he watched her when she slept25
when she cleaned her room26
when she danced naked after she got out of the shower27
when she changed her underwear, clothes, etc.28
and when she had men over29
he watched how she liked to be touched 30
and how she touched her men31
he became32
voyeur like to her and her ways33
her habits and her taste34
Jason was a mellow kind of guy35
he was pushing 3036
and he lost his childhood sweet heart in a car wreck37
years back38
after he locked him self in his house for two years to grieve over her and his unborn child he became a computer freak.39
and it just so happened this is how it all came to be...40
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trying to think of a way to put all the pieces together
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I was just beginning to ask myself when the next installment was. this is a real great series. I can't wait to read the next one.
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Creepy!
~Katrina -
thank you i just added part 5 check it out
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Loved It
I loVe Freaky Poems, but this one is now going to be my faorite,. i loved it, i got huge goosebumps it was wikit scary lol... but an awsomes write you are very talented, Keep it UP!
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Hi again Red I didnt know that you have another name here,
that is so cool because youre not alone I have five other ones here too as you no doubt know well I ll get to your write now which I think that youve done a fantastic job on by the way
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redqueen, my apologies for the mix up. i just caught it. ngr had a link for me to review and i just assumed it was hers. the comment and applause still stands for itz how i feel, DARK.
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ngr, must be some kind of telepathy going around. even though my story will be quite different from yours, i have an idea that i have yet to put on paper...but it involves a man that is lured by love (and other things depending on my mood at the time itz written) on the net. it will be a crazy story that could appear to mimic life as we know it. i shall applaud you for being so crafty, luvya, DARK.
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what does fgfg mean
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What makes this so scary is that it could really happen. Probably has happened. Awesome poem, i was glued to the screen.
Excellent
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OH YEAH! I forgot about THAT one! You are right!
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No, that one was with Michael Douglas. The movie I was talking about was called Sliver, I looked it up. I just didn't think anyone would care if they knew the title or not.
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I think you are referring to "basic Instinct"
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another great write well-done -
whoa...what a poem...its great that you can tell a story within a poem...not many people are able to do that, but you have perfected it with this one...
great write
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woa....freaky has goosebumps down her back
Great write
Always,
The littl Biter -
That's what scares me about being on a computer 24/7, and having a webcam, and my computer in my room...I'll never sleep right again... >.< lol, nice job, I liked it!! This is something all kids who use the interney should read because it just proves that there are creepy people out there... ...And I'm 14!
Kati.
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I’m curious to find out why this was recommended by NaughtyGrlRed for me to read. It has a cool story feel to it that could use a little tweaking here and there. It reminds me of an old movie from back in the day with Sharon Stone and one of the Baldwin bros. I can’t ever keep their names straight.
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Eeeee... thats so creepy. Scary stuff. Definately a piece worth reading. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work! Take care.
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ya right
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holy shit, creepy stuff here, but its good to bring it back to the past, and if nadia looks like his "lost love" she is sooo screwed...eeek! Great job!!
Katrina -
ooh. cool
a bit of back history here. this is getting really creepy. can't wait to find out how it all ends up -
Bravo!
Wow, very scary stuff, it gives me chills, she should unplug the cam.
Well done, sobering!
USpace
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someone you know, perhaps?
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