Bad Day
I was ready to go home, but I couldn’t find my bus pass, and I didn’t have enough money for the bus fare. I was worried and scared of how to get home. I was about to experience a terrible mini adventure.
I was thinking of how to get home. I could walk home or use the money I have left to call somebody. I decided to walk home because I can’t think of anybody who is not busy or will take their time to pick me up. Also I don’t live too far away, but still is not safe to walk home alone. Plus the people I know are at work, sick, or busy doing something else!
I started to walk home alone. It was raining outside and it was foggy. I had no umbrella so I got soaking wet. I felt my book bag wet. I was almost home, but then it started to get windy.
I got home cold, tired, and wet. My books were wet and I had to dry them with a blow-dryer. It was very wrinkly but dry. My mom got home and I finished my homework by the time she got home. I think I’ll always have some emergency money in my pocket.
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It was a good story. And I agree with Secretkeeper, you have a lacking details of the girl.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 1.
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Cool little story, the only thing about it I disliked was the fact it was lacking details of the girl it was about.
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I know.
I was supposed to be the girl in the story. It really didn't happen,but I imagined it. I didn't want to be specific because it was just a short quick story. Youknow what I mean.Just a quick story.
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