i walk into science class
laughing and ready for trouble
i sit down ready to bubble
i'm going to explode.
now let's get done
the teacher yells
but there is something she doesn't tell
that is have fun
i break free and can't stop
i'm gonna get you introuble
i'll ruin your project
through your stuff away
i'm going to get you in trouble
there is nothing you can say
this is fun
i hope it will not stop
i'm going to get you in trouble
i'm really good at that
it brings out the new me
so you better be on your gaurd.
A contest entry
- Poems... by Surreal Rhapsody.
100 points, ended November 26, 2007, 18 entries
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230 points, ended November 14, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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Wow, that really was interesting! ^.^ You got me exiteted while I read it! I liked the emotion you put in the story! awesome poem! Good luck on the contest!
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Fun?
Hrm interesting you must feel very excited, happy and (full of adrenaline) when you get into trouble? I;ve never thought of this as an alternative for fun at school. Interesting and different. Maybe ill try it.
Anyways i liked it. Great..
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hehe!
LOVE the end! funny, actually!
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sure i like it
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