I'm sick of lies
To make you happy.
Already this poem
Is sounding so sappy.
I act glad like
Life is exciting.
The real truth though
Is in what I'm writing.
Are you wanting
To carry on
Reading this?
It could take long.
Here it goes,
Deep breathe in.
Last chance to chuck
This in the bin.
So much of life
Has been a lie.
Welcoming in
And saying goodbye.
Opening doors
And closing them tight.
Is there no normal
Still left in sight?
Love and junk
Who needs it?
I'm not even sure
In this life if I fit.
Friends backstab,
Cheat and steal.
Makes you wonder,
Which ones are real?
Siblings, which ones
Are real, step and half.
This story is making
Me want to barf.
Sometimes school
goes awfully wrong.
It's too boring
And far too long.
When will we
Next see the sun?
When will I next
Be happy and fun?
Tomorrow is stormy
Just like today.
I can't wait
Till life is okay.
This world is
A tortured place.
But nowadays its
What I have to face.
But today I'm writing
What's on my mind.
A good friend is
Really hard to find.
Parents are unfair,
They don't understand.
They don't get the point
Of our favourite band.
Sometimes in life
We can't see why.
We can be bothered
and just want to die.
Author notes
I need any suggestions you can think of please!!!!
Please tell me what you think
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I liked the way you used self deprecation in the poem.
It could have been a long whiny moan (I'm often guity of this in my poems) but using this technique really helped and made it an enjoyable read.
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wow, thats really good. =D
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Wow
It has a lot of meaning to it and i love it.
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omg thats so kewl!!!!!
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Wow good job there I love how the words just speaks out. This world is really a tortured place would it be something if there would no lies or hate in the world it would be so much better. Keep up the good work
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I really enjoyed reading this I hope you add more to finish it. The words flow so well & are so true I've been there to sometimes it's like you find it hard to trust anyone these days it does make someone wonder who there real friends are sometimes. Lies drive me crazy & I hate people who lie so much about things. As for suggestions just write from your heart on it & it should come naturally I'll check back in to see if you add more
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You are right my gal love sucks
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Awesome
Hi,
This is awesome!!!!!
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Hello! It is coollllllloooooool!
♥♥ HeartyHeart
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I loved the flow, and the words.
This is good, I'll keep coming
back since it's not finished
though
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