Things That Will Happen Next

I walk around in circles,

Wondering what will happen next

And when it will happen

My heart beats fast for someone I haven’t met yet

My eyes search for something I haven’t seen yet

My mouth awaits something I haven’t yet tasted

My hands search for something I haven’t yet felt

I can’t wait to get older and know what happens

But until then I just want to be the wacky teen I am

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I don't have any favorite movies.
It's short, I know but it gets the my messege across.

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  • Veronica Leigh
    March 7
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    I love that you recognize that you aren't old enough yet for the things you want to experience. That shows a lot of maturity on your part. You are definitely more mature than I was at your age. I applaud you for that. Nicely done again.

    Line 4 is my favorite. Well done.


  • MaggieRhe
    November 5, 2007
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    Cute


  • Miki Koishikawa
    October 16, 2007
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    This is cute keep writing,honey


  • LostSoulOfRage
    October 13, 2007

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    thnx for entering the contest and srry for the late commenting.
    okay this is really good i like it. its really good. great job and keep it up.

    -LostSoul