She crumbled inside, as those horrid words left his lips. Inside she fell into a crying ball of who she really was. The set up was so hopeful, the words began to wrap her in a wonderful rising cloud, that almost took her away to a place of happiness she hadn't been in so long. But the set up was only so hopeful. As the final words came out of his mouth and crushed her spirit whole heartedly.1
She wanted to run, she wanted to cry, right there in front of him, the only person she couldn't show any of her emotions to. She was lost, once again, without a hope for anything. She had no where to run, and no tears to cry. 2
And the razorblade was her only friend.3
The darkness closed in around her, when there should of been light. The darkness, that was darker than any she had been unable to see before, suffocated her inner being. She became a small child, unaware of her surrounding or anyway out of this hell hole he just made for her. The uncertainties were endless.4
She tried to look for anyway out. Anyway out of whatever hell and emptiness she just found herself in now... she found it.5
And the razorblade was her only lover.6
The beauty of the blood drew her in... drew her away from the pain, from the hope, from the words. She felt as if she was saving herself, finding herself, and loving herself. Everything seemed okay, and she wondered if it was her own blood, that now leaving her, was what really plagued her so. 7
With another loving caress from her new found lover, she felt lighter. The problems of the world felt to be leaving her body through the beautifully made slits in her skin. She fell in love with the sight of her own blood dripping from her body. She fell in love with the lifeless color creeping from her hands up her arms.8
And the razorblade was her last goodbye...9
Author notes
it's not how i wanted it to come out, but it's how it came out.
What did you think? Please comment!
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we could! we'll get anthony to write us some music, cause he kicks ass at it. but the whole set up and wording will need to be worked on. probably only the idea will stay the same. and a few key phrases.
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It is very beautiful. I like it Laura. It's elegantly written. I think it should be a song, with a very artistic music video, that we should make. ^^ ... and with madison's help... we COULD actually do that... -^
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totally awesome
oh my god, i love that....that was awesome....i wrote a story, you should read it and comment on it, its longer, and not as beautifully written as yours, but whatever, i'd like to know what ya think. ^_^
--Jenny
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