Fetish - poem # 2

You know it's not even fun
when it's just simple sex
cause I want the pleasure
that's way more complex
I don't need a simple body clash drive
If you want self mutilation
then I'm up for the ride
Table yourself and back up in boy
cause sodomy's time to get down1

And I want the knife blade toy2

You say your fetish is a foot lick stimulation3

well I say you way to slow to retalitaion4

I want you metal in down my slide5

I want to feel it deep inside 6

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣ Blake

    JESUS WOMAN
    what the fuck happened.
    Did you loose your groove or did you get completly turned off?
    Either that of you were not thinking properly because this poem was really shocking.

    *shakes head*
    WOMAN....

    ♣ Blake


  • Glowstarcharmer
    March 20

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    ok I dont mean to be discouraging but I dont think that this poem is one of your best i must say. I am a huge fan of yours and I read this poem because I have just read 'Festish Poem #1' and loved it. I dont really understand the line 'I want you metal in down my slide' but that could be because its the middle of the night and Ive been up all night watching films and drinking with my daddy (cos Iv just got back for my spring break and its kind of a tradition) so my mind is a bit befuddled, lol. Anyway, I still love you and this poem is still a lot better than a lot of other stuff Ive read.

    X Amber X