Fetish - Poem # 1


Punish the bad ones
take me to bed
like a one full of needles
leave me for dead
that's what I surrender
the fetish of mine
as a corpse masquerader
Then just burn me on fire
start from my feet and flatter my chest
and hang me from suspension
while your tongue taste my breast
Clamp in this part and make me feel pain
and when where done with suspension
well just tie me in chains
or tie me in rope have you got a chained belt
cause the way that this feels
well the pleasure is felt
why not my fingers stop the blood come through
Like you hand cuff and ruff me till in black and blue
Bondage obsession inside my heart
o you insert the candy and You tare me apart
see I don't mind and I don't care
cause Kinky is much better when you touch me down their
or better yet why not even a hose
but I'm guessing that's till BORING so where even really close 1

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Just random kinky ramblings inside my fetish mind

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  • MorbidGarden
    March 11

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    really hot, this one...while i'm not into "extreme sports" i like the way you wrote this...very good job...


  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    ♣ Blake

    HIT..HOT....HOT
    WASABBIIII !!!!
    DAMNN GIRL YOU'RE ON FIRE.
    YOU SURE DO LOVE BDSM....KINKY BITCH

    ♣ Blake


  • TNTrouble
    September 21, 2008

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    Very hot and nasty...My kind of stuff. As you well know by now blair...ha. I enjoyed the thoughts that went through My kinky mind as I read this one.


  • Glowstarcharmer
    March 20, 2008
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    hehehe, I liked this poem. Although its content was pretty heavy the poem itself didnt seem to be too serious (which was a good thing). It flowed really well and the rhythm seemed to increas as the story went along, kind of adding to the urgency of the desire. It was very hot my dear, good work.

    X Amber X

  • werner1221
    November 1, 2007
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    hahahaha. funny & kinky.. i couldnt help but smile when i read this ;-)


  • Mr Typo
    October 11, 2007
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    Ouch!

    Very Kinky Blair.
    I must say that I think you did a very good job on this poem.
    Although I like the tender affections between a man and a woman your poem was a nice change of pace, a little disturbing (as was Poem 2)yet enthralling, a very nice dichotomy!

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