Monologue # Four - First day blues
Jenny stormed into the house, throwing her books across the floor "FUCK THEM, FUCK THEM" she screamed ,taring the pages of writing she had attempted during the hour she was there. "Fuck the whole damn lot of them".
Mrs Morley who had woken upon hearing the back door slam shut, ran into the kitchen almost tripping over Jenny's books. She leaned forward picking them up and placed them on the table, staring at Jenny. The tears had already started falling from her eyes. Mrs Morley stepped closer towards her daughter "Jenny, what's wrong".
Jenny threw the paper on the floor and wiped her snotty nose on her sleeve "I don't want to be a writer anymore, I want to be a Doctor or a Dentist , anything besides a writer".
Mrs Morley knew she had to be careful with what she said, Jenny could be a little over sensitive sometimes "Honey I don't believe that for one second, now what happened today yo make you say this".
"What happened Mum, that damn stupid son of a bitch madame La Da Lola labeled me Jenny Monologue, slandered me in front of my class and I ad to sit their and take it while she snickered away, and while the others all looked their noses down on me, like I was some scum or filth, and all I said was my name".
Mrs Morley frowned, walking closer to her daughter , she wrapped her arms around her "She is trying to frighten you Jenny, to test you out, to see if your determined, not to slander you, and so what if they stare, let them stare at least their staring at something far more flattering than Madame Lola's ass"
Jenny giggled like a school girl "yeah I guess you got that right".
Mrs Morley looked down at Jenny "Don't let nobody or anything discourage your dream, have faith and set that bitch straight".
Author notes
Hay guys,
Hope you like part four and yes so for all the people saying it's true , yes their is a lot of Jenny in me !!
ALSO My Grammer and punctuation suck > bare with me please I am seeking help with this ...
I also think that well I love this story ha ha
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I like the way that the mom turned her thinking around, while it doesn't work all of the time, it did with this one, and I can't wait to read the next one... good job..
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true you need to work on your grammar and punctuation, maybe a bit spelling as well. lol but this chapter is nice and fun. It's interesting, but I think you should try and get the reader's curiosity so that they wouldn't wait to read the next chapter. Nice chapter
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This part is really good...but how about going back and showing me what else happened in the school room. Show me, don't tell me.
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I actually liked this, I may have to go back and read the other parts.
And talk about a straight-talking no-nonsense mom, wow. ha ha -
OH man! I so know how this goes. people looking down because their head is so far up their asses! Great job! I love this part!
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I think that this fourth part of Monologue was probably the best for me, cause the action and drama that you made Jenny go and do, like yelling cusswords and such.
I think the grammar has improved from the third part, too. I look forward to part 5 and will be reading your other stuff, too.
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