Monologue- Prologue
I wanted sex with him like Nothing I had ever felt before. The craving constant, the feeling, unbearable and every time I saw him my body ached with pleasure, a pleasure so intense it drove me insane.
I'd wanted sex before, doesn't everyone want sex, sex is a human want, a human need. to reproduce to create, to seduce and secrete, like the venom of vanity or seclusion in faith. The good and the evil, the deadly sin of lust and temptation, or the acts of love, marriage, separation.
Making love, is it really making love or a fabrication of the puzzle we piece together, true the blend and the torture of mans soul, desires placed upon mounds of Ecstasy.
We all wan't sex, it's the reason behind the sex that defines the person , their lives, their truth and their lies, their betrayal and their greed.
Sex is murder, rape, horror and Sex is beauty, peace, closure. Sex is an interlock, intercourse and instinct between any two human beings, or three or four and when on judges and decides maybe more.
I wanted sex with him Like I wanted to live, it was in me, a reason, a choice, an idea, a fantasy, erotic, stimulating and sometimes when I lay quiet it meant to many things I could not describe. Ton many ideas , it really had gripped me.
These times I didn't dare to touch, so afraid of what I might do, so I just lay their in total silence, watching the light flicker in the street, all lucked up and warm. I knew my body cried for it, cried for me to make it disappear, I could feel my body getting itself ready, but I refrained, held me hands against my sides until eventually I would fall asleep.
To be continued....
Author notes
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This is an introduction to my new story Monologue.. This is about A young Writer and her dream to become a published author and the ups and downs of her journey... This is like her thoughts on a character she will introduce, well Ha ha I will introduce in the story later on ...
I hope you enjoy - Monologue # Prologue
xox Blair xox
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This is great I just love this part. Sex is murder, rape, horror and Sex is beauty, peace, closure. Sex is an interlock, intercourse and instinct between any two human beings, or three or four and when on judges and decides maybe more.
I cann't wait to read more -
Well, this monologue surely has me in its tentacles or is it just because I'm male? Who knows? But what I do know is that you have described what the conflict so eloquently and so grippingly that I can't wait to read more... well done, blair
DarkOne -
Very descriptive... you've definitely got a way of grabbing your readers' attention! I'm interested to see where this goes. Does she want to have sex with the character she is creating or is she thinking as the character she is creating?
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as I promised...here I am...good start off
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other than a few spelling problems here and there this was a very good start to what might be a very interesting story. I loved the way you described the feeling of wanting sex. I've read too many things recently that don't utilize details to the extent that you did and I liked it.
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niiiiiice ;]
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oh, keep up the good work
lol, i forgot to say that
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Surprisingly interesting....
this was actually very well written, and by that i mean the way you describe the feelings of sex when another human wants it.
it all seems very real (and possibly even truthful lol)
it also kinda seems as if you've got like, i dunno, but a real.... feeling for this, you
know?
lol, probably not, but what i mean is that it feels as if the character really knows what its like, as well as going deep into the thoughts of sex, rather than just the fact that sex is something two people do to pass the time
a few mistakes here and there... i can tell, and personally... it pisses me off not that you're a bad person, or that grammar is a weak point for you.. (maybe it is ) but im a real grammar and spelling Nazi
LOLOLOLOL!!! haha, well, i can talk cant i? ive done tons of spelling mistakes on my stories... well anyways, this was a really good description on someones characters or whatevers view on sex -
Interesting Start
You have some interesting analogies about this character's sexual desires, especially for this one guy. You have several sentence fragments and 'their' should be 'there'. Also 'ton' should be 'too'.
I felt that I should start at the beginning. I'm not certain I can keep up with this series.
Andy
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this is...very interesting. No doubt it was good. Great job! I guess what threw me off guard was the talk about sex. Not really expecting it.
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Hmm...this was really interesting considering that you wrote it, but you did describe the feeling of wanting sex very well, or so I've heard. HA HA.
I think that this was also a good way to start off with a story that I think will be just so good and I think that you will possibly go far with this if you are provided an editor...
Keep up the great work, Blair!
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