You Dreams Can Kill You Part 3

He went home and got cleaned up, had something little to eat. At 5:00 pm she had called him saying to come back to the shop. That they had to get things ready. He rushed right over there. They turned on the computer and the devices she had created. They grabed them and got into his car. They drove around for about three hours, when he askes does this even work. She says yes we just have to find him when all of a sudden there was this bright light in front of them. The light was so bright he couldn't see anything in front of him.

Then there was a big CRASH it seems that they hit a telephone pole. He shook his head and looks over at the lady. She was bleeding from her head. He askes are you alright.? There was no awnser. He reached over to feel for a pulse. But she was gone he began to scream he thought for sure he would get his pay back. He began grabbing the equipment and went back to his house and cleaned up. He starred at the equipment and decided he was going to try and find the guy himself. He gets in his beloved wifes car with all the equipment.

He begins driving around when all of a sudden the equipment began to make noise. He pulls over and looks around and picks up the equipment. Jumps out of the car and starts falling the signal. It led him to a house he tried to knock but there was no awnser. So he breaks in the door, when all of sudden the house alarm sounded. Phone begins to ring and some had awnsered it was a womans voice he heard.

So he knew she was ok. When all of the equipment started going again just a few houses down. So he began to run over there he got there and knocked on the door but no awnser. So he kicked in the door again but no alarm so he followed the signal. To were the ghost was. When he got there he noticed the woman was still breathing but he noticed there was writing on her saying YOUR DREAMS WILL KILL YOU. He keep telling the lady to hold on he was calling for help. He called 911 and told them they needed to send an ambulance and he gave them the address. The equipment started going nuts again so he follwed it he realized he couldn't see the ghost because he didn't have the speacial glasses on that helps see the ghost.

So he made sure he put them on this time. As he got to the next house were the equipment was leading him to. He tried knocking on the door. But no awnser so once again he busted down the door following the signal he had. Lead him straight for a room of a young lady who was no more then 19 years old and carefully opened the door not to spook the ghost. Turned on the machine that would trap the ghost sending him away for ever. As he carefully opened the door he looked around and there was the ghost on top of the young lady. As he points the device towards the ghost and yells out at the ghost the ghost turns to him and he switches the device open and the ghost starts screaming NOOOOOOOOOOOOO. The ghost was gone forever.

He got his revenge for his wifes death and saved a few more lives.....

THE END

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i HOPE YOU ENJOYED I HAVEN'T WRITEN A STORY IN A WHILE AND ALL OF A SUDDEN THIS CAME TO MIND AND i JUST BEGAN TO WRITE. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK

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  • DisastrousLetdown
    October 23, 2007

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    I must say you have a wild imagination. I just read parts 1-3, and I think you did pretty good. You have a talent for writing stories like this!

    beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 2, characters: 2.


    • Crystal Ellens
      October 24, 2007
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      Disasterousletdown, thank you My imagination seems to run a little wild on me some times.