Jamie walked in Bander High school with pride and she brought her popularity with her. Puckering her glossed lips at the cunning boys and avoiding the nerds. she caught both genders attention as she audaciouslly walked through the school corridors. Jamie wore a pink short-sleeve turtle neck sweater with a bage minie skirt with pink strappies shoes.1
A Blonde-haired teen with a red Baby Phat shirt and black pants ran up to Jamie beaming with joy.2
"Hi jamie!!!! How was your summer, any thing new you want to announce, I love that Outfit!!!" She said distressed.3
"Come down Maya , gosh. I told you not to act so nervous around me."4
"Sorry, my bad , let me start over."5
Maya straightened her back and cleared her throat.6
"What's up Jamie!" Maya said with a fake smile. Jamie just rolled her eyes and acted like the smile was absolute and real.7
"Good, now please be quiet. I'm looking for Brad, and besides your talk time is in 50 minutes." She sassed.8
Jamie scanned the hall ways for her boyfriend with carefull eyes.9
She soon knew she would'nt find him in the school corridors so she headed to class with Maya by her side.10
The two walked in a yellow door way and found two seats on the
left side of the room. Jamie glared around the room to see most of her classmates from last year socializing with they're pears.
She just rolled her eyes and waited in her desk impatiently.11
Suddenly the bell rang and a small crowd of teens rushed into the room.12
Author notes
This is a story about a 26 year old teacher and a 16 year old teenager falling in love.sadly, it's not done because I have other things to do on this site right quick.
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This is a good start, love to see the rest...
DarkOne -
I think that this was yet another good story from you, Brenda. The flow and story to it was just really good. I would revise it a bit to get the grammatical kinks out, but other then that, it was great.
I look forward to more of your stories and getting some cool feedback! Keep up the great work, Brenda! -
My Verdict
This is interesting. There are some errors in grammar, punctuation, stuff like that, but whatever. ^.^ Let me know when you write more. I like the name Maya, it's pretty. Anyways, keep writing! -
I can tell this is gonna be good.a teacher and a student falling in love.
I'm looking forward to reading this when you finish it.
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