My friend, the cheese wheel

My friend wass watching QVC and saw an in-destructable watch.1

So she called and said, "Is it cheeese-dip proof? 'Cuz my last watch wasn't." 2

The lady was very mad and turned her into a cheese wheel.3

Now, all she can say is...... cheeeeeese-dip.4

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  • September 12, 2004
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    CHEESY

    I love ur poems they are awesome!!!! CHEESEWHEEL floating fairy doesnt know jack check out some of my stuff!

  • deathbylove45
    September 12, 2004
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    I'm just warming up. More serious poems are coming. In the meantime,why don't you read my first 'serious' poem, 'Stories Untold'

  • -diamond tears-
    September 12, 2004
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    i dont understand... whats it about? i think you should try writing a more serious poem. in the chatter box before when you said noone reads your poems, i think they do, but then dont comment because they dont know what to say because your poems are abit strange... maybe read some of mine or someone elses and get ideas, then you should get to know people and get inspirations