You Just Alone

beaten down into this cesspool
kick out the man in me
broken down inside my mental cage
violent and damned sea

break through the veil of hate
take the flesh of the bone
kick and scream whilst never being taken
to hell alone

you brought this outta me
never will you survive

taken into the pits of this life
snuff tasting death
upon those tears you wept for me
from my life being only a myth

was i here or were you just alone
broken in two is your heart on the throne
crystal tears to tell your hell
distorted under the breaking of light for only you to tell

she woke under skies to see me
under hated trees killed in mystical ease
torn apart from the fables tale
until the nightmare has been closed by the keys

before god layed his judgement on her
though she blackened her face
he still kept her wealth
and drained her life from grace

take this life from her
take it away before she knows i am not real
the pain she'll feel forever know
for unknown to the world to steal

moving in slow motion
breaking through the pain of death
as she died
as she died and took her last breath

holding the thought of me in her head
black is the broken thoughts of the dead
eternally lost is her soul to be
constantly believing that there is love from me

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just something i decided to write about

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  • Prodigious.Mirth
    October 5, 2007

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    this was queit a dead hit in my skin... dont ask me why but i had a certain feeling it wasn't all their was like their was a hidden message or somthing.. I know well maybe it's just all in my head but I feel like I dont know im haha connected .. well i feel like I can connect with this peice

    it was wonderfully written and got into my emotions so well done

    blair xox