I am from lying on the roof watching the stars in the summer, slowly drifting off to sleep. I am from walking barefoot through wet sand, feeling it squish between my toes. I am from lying awake at night, too many questions in my head to sleep. Dozing all day, drinking soda to keep my eyes open. I am from laughter and joy, pain and anger. I am from smiles, grins and glares. I am from sitting in the rain, listening to the silence of the noise around me. I am from sobbing in my closet as screams echo from the next room. I am from hiking rhrough the woods laughing with my family. I am from staying up all night with friends. Living off pizza and Martinelli's Sparkling Cider. Waking up past noon, lounging all day. I am from blasting music so loud the neighbors can hear. I am from movies, TV and books. I am from sitting for hours, thinking about nothing. I am from, barely believeing it myself, LOVE.
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I did this in my writing class today. comment please.
Please tell me what you think
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Hey, this is cool. I'm going to refrain from commenting on your many fragments because they sound poetic when you use them in that way, but you do need capitals, and in the first sentence it should be "lying" not "laying." Remember: people Lie, things lay.
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yeah, the fragments are sopposed to be like that. I like that scentence, it's easy to remember 'people lie, things lay.'
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