[ On the strange outskirts in downtown Lane lived Tom, Dick and harry and their best friend Sue Jane. ]

On the strange outskirts in downtown Lane lived Tom, Dick and harry and their best friend Sue Jane.

Through the fetish rang softly, they faced all their fears, doing black magic, having sex of the peer.

What a dream then come true, what was awful to some. Where the spew fest toilets, what a maniacs bum.

The stench was off putting, it made them all sick, but sue strapped herself around all of them dicks.

Weren't a mouth nor a hole that just could not be filled. Though the stench was unbearable, had someone been killed.

Like the shit that they smelt, they had dreams to keep strong. So they fucked , tried to forget while they knocked down the wall.
Yeah after a while the smell was so good. So they whiffed it all in, took as much as they could.

Playing tonsil hockey well their tongue taste like crap. So tom, sue and harry took dick from the back.

What a wonderful foursome all covered in dew, cause the smell just soon got to them and they all just spewed.

They put sue on the counter and all licked her all out, as she screamed "FUCK ME JESUS" and came in their mouths.

They had it all night long, what a glorious time. They fucked all night long, until the sun starts to shine.

Which shows what a couple of horny teenagers would do. Even with the deadly stench from the loo ..

Author notes

Me and my strange buddy Nate are doing this thing were we give each other prompts and we have to write about it..

My prompt was to write about a toilet stunk from overuse and people doing naughty things..

Ha-ha Nate, here is the prompt you gave me- it's kinda more like a poem then a story and a little funny as well..

enjoy- cause its so wrong ^_^

Anything you say I'll take

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  • So Strange Greeters member
    October 2, 2007

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    Man, this was really good and I think you have a sure knack for rhyming words and talking nasty in a rhyming way, as well, even without writing anything like cock or pussy, which is a kind of different yet pleasant surprise.

    Good job, Blair!