As he felt her heart beating against his,
as he remembered the ring he’d placed on her finger all those years ago,
He knew they’d never been.
"Goodbye, love."
He flipped the switch as confusion began to flicker across her face.
An old, tired man stumbled out of the simulator.
Author notes
For a contest... Exactly fifty words.
A contest entry
- Another Beautiful Contest! by Taylor Renee.
225 points, ended October 10, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
It's all good.
Comments
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Wow. that's freaking swwet. Emtions are amazing go you.^_^
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Wow.
....Wow.
This was really well written. Wonderful. The emotion is like...there, but not there. Do you know what I mean?
This was really, really well written. Thank you so much for entering...Fifty words exactly! Brownie points there.
Thank you so much for entering, and good luck!
xoxo
Tay
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Outstanding!! Good luck in the contest but for my vote, this is a winner.
Jim
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