if a nightmare could have a nightmare she would be mine
for eternally is the thought in my head tearing me apart
as if i had died in the winter forged in my heart
and my blood seeping into the sands of time1
her call is endless and forever to see
taking away pain once felt in me
for the sun is dying in my eyes
she is the answer to my cries2
if i open my eyes and see she isn't there
my life only to be to compare
my heart forgotten in the light of her
and eternally at night would i stir3
without my nightmare to come at midnight
i would always be in fright
without the scare only cast in pearl
for within her arms i alwasy unfurl4
my hatred seeps away with her smile
and takes me along the haunted mile
her beauty in my eyes and her grace in my thoughts
my heart in her hands is eternally caught5
i'd do everything for her
for she is my goddess holding the pearl
of my love so pure and undying
for now her tears are forever trying6
she keeps me awake at night
for when i fall asleep always the fright
of losing her once again in my arms
and forgetting those loveable charms7
she is and always will be my love
she makes me feel as if i wasn't forsaken
and my heart is hers forever taken
as if flying like a dove8
as my demons call me back to solitude
i cast away the rose into the flame
for without her i would be cursed
forever into deaths lonely game9
reaching for the light of day
and the spring to be forever mine
she dances into the ocean
water sparking never letting her stray10
take me into the darkness
let me be with you
for i'd sell my soul
just to keep my love true11
if i ever lost you
i would surely leave
this place called earth
as i would forever grieve12
if i could only hear
that you are in love with me
i would let go of the light
and fall into the darkness with thee13
as angels dance
and devils cry
for your love in return
i'll always die14
my heart's in your hands
and no where else
and i will keep it there
unless you give it to someone else15
but i always hope you'll keep it with you
then my love will always be true
your tears of crystal fall from the sky
i wipe them away as i hold back my cries16
your so beautiful to me
and i would give everything to you
and forever i always want you to be
in my heart as long as you are true17
as the night becomes day
i look upon the sunrise
and you are still asleep
in your beautiful disguise18
as i write these words
the sands of time fade away
as i paint my heart for you
i hope in your chest it will always stay19
sleep on my love
for tommorrows another day
sleep forever i dont care
as long as i can see you stay20
i see the seasons falling apart
as you sleep on and see
you heal my scars of loves once lost
but i never knew real love till i met thee21
as the world falls apart in my eyes
i look upon you silently sleeping and not care at all
for the world is only a dream but you are my reality
and with you allows me never to fall22
as i stroke your hair as the world dies out
just seeing you makes me never cry out
to the world in hate for in the end
i love you to the ends of the earth without a doubt
Author notes
Written in a time when I was in love with a wonderful and beautiful girl, this poem is one of the remaining things from our relationship.
A contest entry
- With You (Song Inspired Contest.... #1) by Barbara.
800 points, ended October 30, 2007, 6 entries
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225 points, ended November 14, 2007, 24 entries
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450 points, ended October 30, 2007, 28 entries
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1030 points, ended November 2, 2007, 20 entries
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Beautiful. You have expressed so much here. My chin is quivering and there are tears in my eyes. Thanks for sharing.
Brooke
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Oooo I like very much! Its a poem, but it was really good! Heartwarming. Great stuff and good luck!
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Wonderful job. This is beautifully written and it's so meaningful and heartfelt. You're very good at poems, and expressing your emotions. Good luck in the contest, and keep writing.
xxx
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This is beautifully done, and most heart breaking/warming, but the contest asks for 'no poems', so it cannot be considered.
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I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU
this was so sweet. I wish i could write something as good as this for you, but I dont know how to express how i feel... i love you
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it doesn't bother me if you dont write anything for me, just as long as i know you like what i write for you because in the end you are really all that matters to me
i am in love with you too and if you couldn't figure it out from the poem, i am in love with you till the end of the earth and beyond
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like i said you could really feel what you had written you digged deep but it looked like you dint even need to cause the feeling just shines from within this peice
wonderfull my friend- superb
xox blair
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thankyou so much, it was really hard to write because i had to make it perfect for her, but i gave my honest feelings for her and thats what was hardest because the feelings have no words to go with them, and no words exist that could ever express how much i love her
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