“The Tooth Fairy”

• We were up in the sky having a tea break
When all of a sudden the creamy clouds began to shake
The lofty swaying wind came to break
up in heaven there was a quake
• The clouds began to cry
When they heard you sigh
When you began to weep and cry
Tooth fairies had tear drops in their eye

• You have just lost a tooth
A white shining tooth in its youth
It fell and left you uncouth
How you cried on losing that tooth
• The tooth fairy heard your voice
She was in such delight rejoice
The way you spelled those words so cute
How your words went to scoot

• You spelled the r like l
Words got broken and fell
But still you were so fine and well
But the tooth said to you forever farewell
• Under the pillow you laid it that night
The stars in heaven shining so bright
Flickering and shimmering went the moonlight
The tooth fairy came when no one was in sight

• Through the window hole she went in
Your tooth so delicate so thin
How shiny and sparkling it had been
She would greatly love to thin
• A tooth fine like yours like yours so fine
Glossy like spangles shine
So gorgeous in beauty divine
It will do great for a collection of mine

• She came and took it away
But she didn’t want you to dismay
So she left a golden coin away
For you to enjoy when you wake up at day
• Your tooth will make a great necklace
How it glitters at my face
Sparkling in beauty and grace
But she sure left something in replace
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  • Dreams of Insanity
    November 4, 2007

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    It was cute! But...the toothfairy kind of scares me. I just don't like the fact she sneaks into our rooms at night. Well good poem, big brother! Loves you!

    MWAHZ!~


  • plurangel silver member
    October 1, 2007

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    very cute poem. the flow was so fluffy and beautiful i loved the way it rhymed. great job. only this part didn't make sense "You spelled the r like l
    Words got broken and fell "