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  • DeadlyTurnip
    October 2, 2007

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    Wow.........................................

    this ROCKS!!! THAT WAS SUCH A FREAKIN AWESOME STORY!!!! totally helped my day. GREAT JOB!!! *ahem* sorry about that. *stops yelling*

    • writinglover
      October 3, 2007

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      TURNIP HELLO!

      Thank you so much for coming by! You are so crazy! THANKS! Ok well...hopefully this message gets thru! LOL Bye Turnip!


  • ToMsTeR X
    September 30, 2007

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    AWESOME!

    HEY YOOOU! OH my GOSHERS that story was SO GOOD that I actually MADE an ACCCOUNT so I could comment on it! You're an even BETTER writer than I imagined! I mean I KNEW you'd be good.. but this was incredible! You have such a great vocabulary and your descriptions put the reader RIGHT there in the middle of it all! Then I got to the KwannaLoooba part and about fell off the chair! LoL!
    AWESOME story so far! I give you a MILLION stars since this isn't YouTube! Haha
    Rock Onnn!
    ♫ ToM! ♪

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

    • writinglover
      September 30, 2007
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      Heyyyyyy BUDDY! Whats up!? Thank you so much for comeing by here...It really means a lot! Hope your having a super day!

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