Dad

hold my breath,

foreget about death.

Just for second, think of me,

with you, where would I be?

Did you care?

about loosing everything we could have shared?

I guess not,

you weren't what I thought...

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  • Siby Anan
    January 23, 2008
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    It's short, and perfect.


  • asthray.heart
    October 17, 2007
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    Aww Osa, your dad doesnt seem worth the pain for you. I hope your okay.


  • JuliaAlexandrovna
    September 29, 2007

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    I'm sure he regrets not being there for you. He just thinks it's too late to try now.

    I like your expression of feeling.

    x Julez


  • Siby Anan
    September 29, 2007
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    Oh Osa :]

    Stop thinking about your dad!

    xD


    • JuliaAlexandrovna
      September 29, 2007
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      It's hard to stop thinking about someone you can't have, Ziby.

      x Julez

      • Siby Anan
        September 29, 2007
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        But she told me she doesn't want him! She told me she doesn't want him and she doesn't care about him.

        I know it's hard thinking about someone I can't have, I know what it's like but...some people are not worth thinking of.

        • JuliaAlexandrovna
          September 29, 2007
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          That doesn't mean you can stop yourself from wondering what if. And even if they aren't worth it, that doesn't mean that it can be helped. My ex isn't worth it, but I still think what it would be like if I were still with him even though I don't love him anymore.

          x Julez


          • Siby Anan
            September 29, 2007
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            Ah, the what if. I stand corrected there.

            I withdraw my argument there.
            Sorry.

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