No secrets, but this.
“Where you going?” she questioned.
“The park.” He left in the rain.
She followed.
“She’s good, Nicky. Sorry haven’t told her yet.”
“Don’t have to either.” Drew arms around him.
“Sarah.” Startled.
“Your mother told me.”
“Nicky was my fiancé. Drunk driver.”
“She loved you.” Tears.
Author notes
I like to read
Reading is fun.
Pip pip, di doo.(my littl poem)
A contest entry
- Another Beautiful Contest! by Taylor Renee.
225 points, ended October 10, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm a bit confused as to what's happening here. Obviously it's an emotional situation--two lovers, one killed by a drunk. But as to who was killed, and who's talking, I'm confused.
lol
Taylor seemed to grasp it though, so maybe I'm just too tired right now... -
Wow.
I want to cry now.
This was so sad. It was beasutiful, the way you wrote it to tell a story but leave everything open for interpretation.
This was really good.
You did wonderful!
Sad, but wonderful
And you followed the rules!
Good girl!
lol!
Thanks sooo much for entering, and good luck!
xoxo
Tay
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