Chapter 2 of those Adventures
Of that crazy Private Eye Guy,
Freddy the Fearless Fox.
Today he is on another Case !
W. Peter Sanci Sept. 28 / 2007
Well hi there everyone. Welcome to my second chapter today.
I think we’d better get started, for I think Freddy has
started to sway.
He was looking in the local paper to see what kinds Of cases were out there,
He noticed one in his local paper about this girl who went missing right by her front door, That was 25 years ago, and he thougt he’d better pray.
This one look interesting a he said to himself folding
The pages of the Daily News,
There was this murder in Oalkville Ontario 25 years ago.
And it’s still unsolved, maybe if I cab solve it I’ll become a famous private eye, like Sam Spade.
So the first place any researcher goes to is the public library.
So off Freddy went, whistling a happy song to himself.
When he gets to the library he looks around, “No one is going to jump me again, if I can help it. ”
He starts to look in the carrels for information on the
murdered girl.
The case remains open because there are few clues.
Delia Adriano, was dropped off outside her house on the
It was a Sunday night, about 9;30pm, several witneses saw her being forced into a van, and drove off.
Her body was found six weeks later more than 20 miles from her house.
Through dental work, the Halton Regional Polie
identified the body as that of adrianno.’s.
An autopsy failed to reveal the cause of death.
Her fiancé was a suspect earlier on in the investigation,
but he had an alibli.
The handful of witnesses were able to give a composite description.
There were more than 1,500 people at her funeral.
The case remains open today.
Wow, Freddy sighs as he put the newspaper away.
I really have my work cut out for me in this case,
He said mumbling to himself.
Where do I go to start he again said to himself.
I know I’ll go and talk to her parents.
Well my friends our private eye went over to Adrianna’s house, but it was all closed up.
What do you think after 25 years.
So back to square one. Freddy scrathes his head for a minute and tries to think.
Then he had a brainstorm, I will start looking around the places she used to hang out.
Now he thought that was a great plan.
So he started a the school where she worked as a secretary.
He looked all over the place.
He came up empty handed again.
Then he said to himself I think I’ll go and talk to the
people who worked with her.
Again Freddy came up empty handed.
This case was beginning to get him down.
So he said I need a break from all this PI stuff.
So he went out and ordered a big steak for his supper.
And then went home to bed.
The next morning he woke up with a clear head and
He shouted right out loud, “ I got it, I’ve got it.”
And he drove over to the closest police station.
And he went into to talk to some in charge.
He said I have solved the Delia Adrianno case.
Well the officiers just looked at him and laughed.
Ok he said, I’ll prove it, and he took out a small piece
of note paper from his pocket.
He said boldly to those disbelieving policmen,
On this piece of paper I have written the killer’s name.
And he was right, the police officiers were astounded.
And so my friends Freddy the Fearless Fox does it again.
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