He loves you,
alittle to much.
He obesses,
overly.
And you know what?
BANG.
He loves you dead.
Author notes
Random as hell.
xD
Starving,
and cold.
You sit,
wondering.
-that one sucks.-
A contest entry
- Another Beautiful Contest! by Taylor Renee.
225 points, ended October 10, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
xD
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lol i kinda laughed a little bit at the end, too... what is it with this poem?!?! hehe.
a couple of mistakes here and there:
- "alittle" is two separate words : A LITTLE
- "obesses" should be "obsesses"
well done... this was good. -
Okay, I'm just like Yume. I laughed at the end, too!
I don't know why! I mean, I'm pretty sure it wasn't meant to make us laugh!
Okay. lol. This was good! Random.....lol....like you said.....but not bad at all!
But really. This was sooo good!
Thanks so much for entering, and GOOOD LUCK!!!
xoxo
Tay
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BANG!
8D
How..
Explosive..
> w < -
rofls. Love the BANG, He loves you dead bit. It made me laugh ^_^
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