Satin Sheets

Satin sheets which

we made love on,

experiencing all the pleasure

that our bodies can

give us.

Savage passion,

igniting a flame

which

melts our naked flesh.

Opened mouth kisses,

gentle touches

of each other's hands,

never to want

this to end.

Sweet rapture

does consume us,

while we go through

the motions of such love.

Never to let go,

never to stop,

till

we finally feel complete.

Till we are finally

in unity.

Heart,

mind,body,

and spirit.

And upon then,

conception of life -

bringing such blessings

that will last an eternity.

Satin sheets

which covers her flesh,

soft fabric touching

that alluring nakedness -

while she sleeps.

Engulfed within,

that thin, caressing shield.

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  • MorbidGarden
    October 27, 2008
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    ...breathless...you rock! this was fuck-tastic, man! wonderful!


  • Sailor Mars
    December 16, 2007

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    i really liked this. it gives a new inside into 'love' i found it an interesting read and usally dont read peoples work with much kindness but you did a grate job


  • plurangel silver member
    October 1, 2007

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    awww wow this made me feel all mushy gushy at the end of it. this actually brought back memories (memories which i will not explain here lol) but they were good memories. i loved how much emotion there was on this piece. very beautiful!!

  • zac125
    September 28, 2007
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    I like this one, I don't really read stuff like this much, but its a good poem.


  • RedHearts
    September 26, 2007

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    Great write. I loved the flow of the poem. THe way you have described love making..great! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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