Forever

Forever fine,

Forever mine,

You are ever so kind

And I love you

A contest entry

• Another Beautiful Contest! by Taylor Renee. 225 points, ended October 10, 2007, 10 entries
  Honorable mention
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

Comments

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  Azzy Bear
  November 7, 2007
  
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  Oh wow, so innocent. and kinda over the top on the "Cutesy" level.
  
  God, now that i look at what i just typed, that sounds so gay. lol
  
  just a few comments....

  
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  LostShadow
  September 27, 2007
  
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  This was short but sweet. It flowed nicely and had good formation. I liked the "forever mine" part beacuse its so sweet and gentle and would be great if it was true.
  
  Great work and keep it up
  
  Emma
• ZackTruel
  September 26, 2007
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  Short, Sweet, and Cute. Great job!
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  Taylor Renee
  September 26, 2007
  
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  P.S.:
  I hate being as mean as I am, babe, but you didn't read all the rules There was something you're supposed to put in your author's notes
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  Taylor Renee
  September 26, 2007
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  Awwww!
  This was really sweet!
  ....Can you tell me what the message was?
  
  Great work!

  
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  Cari Cullen
  September 25, 2007
  
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  That is so cute

  i really liked it! hhehe you should do poetry oooo you should come and see my poems there are really sad keep it up and write more
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  Kaori
  September 25, 2007
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  Awww... so short and so sweet! ^_____^

  
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  Surreal Rhapsody
  September 25, 2007
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  awwwww...
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  Siby Anan
  September 25, 2007
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  Sweet