Errr.. they came to me in the night1
it took all i had to fight2
teeth ripping into my flesh3
they gave me a good thresh4
ripping and gripping5
flesh tearing, me swearing6
i thought i would die7
this was my last good-bye8
but it stop, breathing hard9
left me like i was discard10
out of nowhere11
but i didn't care12
i was alive 13
i laid there just to revive14
all i tried to do15
is get to you16
just to let you know17
we all have and evil foe18
hes on the loose19
this might just reduce20
your chances of dying21
so you wont be flying22
run away never look back23
because someones going to have a snack24
i hope you stay alive long enough to say your prayers25
you'll be the last of there cares26
good-bye27
hope you stay alive28
Author notes
this is about werewolvs if you havent already guessed it. Its someone who gets atacked and survives to worn others
MAGIC
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Thanx for Your comment you dont relize how much they mean to me you can ask BlackRain she knows well thank you!!
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Congratulations on the silver.
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oh thanx for the tip haha sry well you seem like a kool person well dont be afraid to talk
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This runs helter skelter from beginning to end. It has fear and terror running through and your words paint a dark picture. Good luck in the contest. Pssst. you might want to add the word magic to your author's comments so that you're not DQ'd. Good luck in the contest.
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oooohhhh. thanks for the warning pal. felt a shiver run down my spine. me being a horror buff, loved the shivers. thanks for a deceptively simple verse that packs in quite a . . umm, well, bite.
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*shiver* that was good, really detailed. I liked it. Well I love you!!
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