I told you that I liked you more than just a friend and you just tool it and used it agenst me then hurt me more than some one can just forget about. Now I can't tell soneone if i like him or not because im afeaid that i'll get hurt even if i know that they would not even try to hurt me in any shape or form which is scary that soneone cares enough to tell me that im crazy and you can tell that he cares by every thing he dose
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short but full of emotion
A very raw piece full of emotion, possibly based upon experience. Cant really give too much of a review because its a brief piece and it would be good to see more.
beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 2, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 1.
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thanks it is kind of from experience its a long story dont want to explain
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