Brought to the pain of loss,
I weep over what I had,
But now that it’s gone,
I only just realise what I wanted,
Angels of despair,
Call out my name,
Bring me closer to,
Deaths lonely game,
Can’t take back what’s been said,
I can’t change the past,
Break down the hatred,
For the pain is vast,
now you know,
you’ve broken me,
and left me alone,
nothing left inside,
apart from the pain I know,
taken back and now see the sunshine reveal,
I’m left for dead but still won’t die,
Though you have left me I won’t cry,
Nothing you say can make me leave,
For you are what I truly need,
Though I leave in the flesh,
Doesn’t mean I leave in spirit,
Angels call and yet I still fall,
And now you take it all,
Within your call,
Feel the light fall upon your body tonight,
Know the pain that you leave in sight,
Nothing to fall upon apart from the fight,
To save yourself from the pain that envelopes you life,
Just know that I always wanted you,
Not to be mine but to be with me,
I let the dreams fall away from me,
But never away from you,
Author notes
There is a third part to come that i have decided. So yeah watch out for it, it'll be really really dark! This part has actually been around me for a long time and it works with the first part. Note that all three parts are different and the third part will be the finish of the trilogy and because of another dream i had will require my utmost skills to recapture the sorrow from that dream.
all the best
keep writing all of you
Nightmare
A contest entry
- Poetry(I'll add more points soon) by Myeisha.
185 points, ended December 8, 2007, 35 entries
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Comments
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cool poem, I loved it, and I'll try to read the first part when I get the chance, i might forget,lol.
Thankyou so much for entering the contest, good luck!!!
Keep on writing!!
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suberbly written- triggering the emotions and the heart wrenching difficultys of life ...keep up the great work luv blair xo
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