I feel like I am going to cry
But the tears won’t come
Im so scared
Things that I don’t understand
Word that are heavy
Onset emotions I can’t handle
Wanna run away
Cry and just leave this place
Yet I don’t want to die
How to escape this
Answers are all wrong
Who to turn to who am I
Why are things all wrong?
When things were never right
Trying my hardest to hold on
But fingers are slipping
Like the ego that keeps me living
Fear of sleeping
Eternal darkness all alone
Need someone beside me
Hide me from these tears
Hidden fears that well inside me
Running
Useless
Hopeless
Sleepless.
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Author notes
how i feel right now, i jus wanna die =[
Gah I dont wanna move =[
Comments
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Oh, Ebbz, I'm here for your in case you need comfort :] And you can't die! Too many people love you!! >.<
This poem showed a LOT of emotion...
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angel u know im here for you, i just wish i could be more help, i feel useless dont die ill miss you way to much! there are other ways to get by but there just not that easy. dont hold tears back angel its how u show ur emotions. remeber i luv u always n foreva mwa xoxoxox
plus this was a nice lil poem. xoxox
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Intersesting
Poetry is not usually my type of thing, but on this occasion I must change my opinion.
The piece is pacey has a nice feel to it and unlike so many other poems gets the job done susinctly.
Nice one.
All the best.
jsdk
beginning: 4, language: 5, ending: 4.
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