From the corner of my eye,
One door,
The word and the void.
The word and the void.
It was like,
The birds sung along.
It was like,
One door.
We were one door away,
From the void,
When the birds sung along,
With the word.
Author notes
In an abstracted mood. I feel like floating from this the cosmos and into another.
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- Insane yet? by Ninja Bubble.
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Comments
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It was very nice yet made no sense, but then again thats what abstract is right? I think it could fare well if extended, though.
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exxelent write up ^^
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