morning of fright

I wake up and go to the bathroom and look in the mirror. A different face stares back at you with a horrifying look. It was missing all the skin on his face, red and steaming like it had been torn from a defensive creature in the dead of night. I screamed horrified by what i saw and looked away. I felt my face and it felt like normal; like it has always felt.

I decided to go to my brother to see if it was true or not. I started to walk to the living room and saw my brother facing the TV i called his name
"John....John...JOHN...are you alright!"

slowly he turned around and a spasm of terror shot up my back,barley able to control myself i screamed and almost deadly scream and ran for it.

Questions started to come into my head, whats going on, am i dreaming so i figured hey maybe the neighbors could help me so i started to run heart pounding, sweat rolling down my forehead.

I finally started to walk and half way there my friend Eric came trotting by. I was just about to call his name when i noticed that not only his skin on his face was off but it had spread to his arms as well. The skin was disintegrating off his hands and arms so fast it was unreal.............

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I wrote it in like 2 minnutes cant you tell

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  • Honeysuckel
    September 18, 2007
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    Wow this could be a greath story if it had more detail a nd stuff. Good job


  • angel.of.mine
    September 18, 2007

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    eek.. this would make a great story if u expanded it and maybeh added more detail and stuffs... it was a gud read, short and sweet. lol thanks for entering


  • NotTheDroids
    September 18, 2007

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    Actually this has a lot of potential to be a good story, but it needs to be expanded on and some sort of conclusion added - at the moment it reads like a prologue ot opening chapter.