Thirteen

The number thirteen
Suspiciously mysterious
The number thirteen
Makes me feel delirious

Black cats and ladders
Rabbit feet and halloween
There's nothing quite like
The number thirteen

Paranoia or superstitions?
Lurking 'round the danger signs
Bad luck or the power of the mind?

Leaving good luck to be unseen
that's right... the number thirteen!



Author notes

For a contest...
This is poem with thirteen lines about the number thirteen. It's not fantastic but I thought it would be fun to try this out.

A contest entry

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  • sarahhitch
    October 8, 2007
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    Another great entry for the contest, I wish you luck.

    Sarah.

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.


  • Azzy Bear
    October 5, 2007
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    I Like It!

    I Like it Alot!


  • potaytee
    September 19, 2007
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    Its really cool. Numbers a quite hard to write about so you did it well


  • artemis the hunter
    September 19, 2007

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    This is one cool poem! I liked it- esspecially the descriptions! The rhyme added to it as well. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!

    language: 5, plot: 5, characters: 5.

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