Secret

Do you know what I see?
How do I tell you?

Open my heart, try to speak,
Bring the world,
Leave it at your feet.

Wishes upon stars,
Fairytales, children's stories,
Never come true.

My life, like an open book,
Is there before your eyes.
Yet, alone you still feel.

I'll reach out my hand,
Share me, with you.

Please tell me what you think

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  • rubytearsarefalling
    March 27, 2008
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    Hmmm.

    *poses thoughtfully* interesting

    Midnight


  • So Strange Greeters member
    October 17, 2007

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    I think that you should go to the poetry site at the bottom of the page, if you are to continue posting poems and such. I enjoyed this as much as the last one, though. It was well written and flowed well, too.

    Keep up the great work, Angel No More. I look forward to more of your stories and poems.