a leaf feels like paper
all green and crinkely and dry
crunchy when i step on it
A contest entry
- Haiku Haven by Asfand.
225 points, ended September 27, 2007, 17 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute
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One little suggestion. click edit and delete the extra lines (for poems make sure the "fix line spacing" isn't clicked. Otherwise you get the extra lines that you don't want.
Otherwise I really like this. It has good imagery. Good luck in the contest -
Beautiful for somone your age! keep writing!
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oh, so sweet and heart-warming! wonderful job!
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