Laying here in my bed unable to sleep. Staring out the window at the black deep sky. Getting lost among the stars. Wishing you were here. Taking a deep breath, counting 1, 2, 3 and then releasing.1
Thinking of your soft hair draping over my face. Your wide grin that's always so irresistable. I begin to think of you, your soft curves. Your touch.2
I sigh once again, frustrated you're not here. All alone, wanting. Wanting so bad.3
I dream of you carressing my face so gently that I can hardly feel your hand there, besides the electricity it sends through me. You slowly lean in. Taking your time. You run another hand through my hair and tilt my head. You trace a trail to my neck with your full lips. Leaving a sense of tingling over my skin. I let my eyes close, intent on this dream.4
You push me back against the bed and undo the buttons on my shirt while I play with your hair. Your movements are slow, teasing. Oh-so teasing. You open my shirt slightly. Revealing everything yet keeping it all a secret. You trace your fingers from the base of my neck, slowly, all the way to my waistline. I feel my stomach lurch with excitement, apprehension, and shock. And then you trace your fingers back up, cupping my breast and leaning over me and kissing me passionately. You pull away, only for a second, to flash me a sly grin and then you work your way down, with your lips and tongue to my other breast. You kiss around it, teasing me. Then you run your tongue over it causing me to groan in a subdued bliss.5
My heart rate increases and my breathing grows heavier. You undo the belt on my jeans smiling at me. You slide my jeans off and then lean over me. kissing me, pressing yourself onto me, woman to woman. Breast to breast. Your hair tickles my shoulders and neck and then you work your way down again. Running your hands over my stomach, causing that familiar lurch when you reach just below my belly-button. my chest pounds with anticipation. And then you lean down and kiss my inner thigh. Growing oh-so close to that certain spot. And suddenly the phone rings and I'm all alone. Still left wanting. Sadly I tear myself away from dream and with slight regret I pick up the phone.6
"Hey baby! What's up?" *gasps* It's you!!!7
"Hi, not much. You'll never guess the dream I just had!"8
And we lay talking and giggling on the phone until we both fall asleep. Both seperated but still connnected.9
To my friend10
My Lover11
My lesbian12
Author notes
yeah, first time trying this..
And by the way, this is just about two girls in a long distance relationship.
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very good...a little teasing that the phone rings when it does, but hey...it works...it's a good story...keep writing
*Blessed Be*
Lauren
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OY.
so this crushed me.
into about 50,000 pieces.
i can so relate.
awesome awesome job. i really love your work.
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This is really sweet... I liked it. Your descriptions in the beginning were wonderful. Very clear. Very imaginable. Don't be too hard on yourself. :]
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thank you
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Oh I loved reading this one. It's so sweet, erotic and romantic all at the same time. Long distance relationships can be oh so hard. I have been there myself with someone years ago and it's hard not being with them every night. Wonderful write!
Joann
beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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thank you much
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You have a knack for intricate detail, and considering the type of piece that this is, it does you quite a bit of justice. You say that you have to be concealed, that you aren't out and free. My heart goes out to you for that. I don't know what I would do if the woman that I love wasn't in bed next to me every night. Its amazing the hold that they can have over us. There are people out there that would say it is against nature...but any woman who knows the way another woman can make her feel can prove otherwise. Thank you for sharing, and good luck to you.
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when you feel something and just open your eyes and your heart to it it's easy to find the details. And also, your comment touched me, thank you so much, it's greatly appreciated.
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Wow! I have a special reason for liking this one . I'm in a similar relationship .
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This is beautiful. Gorgeous in a way. I love it and it reminds me of something we've talked about, certain conversation we've had. I love you.
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lol, yes, a certain part of that does remind me,lol and i miss those convos. Love you too.
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I wonder who this girl is.
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this girl? I don't get where your curiousity is coming from. Please inform me, because I can prolly answer.
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