Pokemon Story the first 2 Chapters

Pokémon Story

Chapter 1

It was nearing dawn, Ash was headed toward Verity Lakefront to see Misty and participate in the Verity Cup Challenge the next day. Ash and Brock knew what hotel Misty stayed in and made reservations to stay there. The Palm trees, buildings, and sea made the Verity Lakefront desirable place to live not. Ash slapped Brock a couple of times to keep him focused from the girls.

“There are so many hot girls here I’m so living here.” “Hey cutie” said Brock to a Blonde walking by.

*SLAP* “Pervert”

“Ouch!” yelled Brock holding his cheek.

“That’s what you get” said Ash angrily “stay focused we gotta go to the hotlel”

“But Ash”

“I said NO!”

The hotel Misty and they were staying was coming into sight. Finally after walking all this way they had come.

“Ok let’s go in” said Ash ushering Brock through the glass doors into the lobby.

At once cool air rushed to them. The lobby was well furnished; walking to the counter Ash asked the receptionist what room was Misty on.

“EWWW!” “There’s old ladies everywhere!” Exclaimed Brock

(Secretly Ash was glad no girls for Brock to drool over in there.)

“Misty eh . . . room 165 on the twelfth floor,” he said.

“Thanks” said Ash hurriedly as he caught up to Brock.

Ash and Brock walked to the elevator Ash pressed the up button after a few moments nothing happened. A sign hung off the elevator, and Brock read what it said.

Elevator closed until further notice

“Oh their elevator’s being repaired,” said Brock “So we have to take the stairs up to…THE TWELTH FLOOR!”

“What, are you sure Brock,” said Ash.

“Yes I’m sure” said Brock “He said so to,” pointing to the receptionist.

“Ok let’s start” said Ash in a determined tone.

“Pika Pika” said Pikachu who couldn’t wait to see Misty and togepi.

Chapter 2

By the time Brock and Ash got to twelfth floor Brock was walking like an old man, Ash was barley keeping up and Pikachu was sitting on Ash’s head enjoying the ride. “Pika”

“Why does Misty have to live so high up” complained Ash.

“I don’t know “answered Brock and, Pikachu answered with a Pika at these comments.

Finally they had made it to the twelfth floor where they were greeted by a cheerful Misty who was sitting on a bench outside her room.

“Hi guys what took you so long” asked Misty curiously.

“The elevator was being fixed” said Brock exhausted from the long journey up the stairs."We had to take the stairs”

“That’s too bad the elevator was working when I was down there”

“When was that?” asked Ash.

“A couple of minutes ago”

“What” said Ash “We walked up those stairs for nothing”

“You didn’t walk up the stairs for nothing Ash, you walked up for me” said Misty pointing to herself.

“Yeah” agreed Brock sarcastically. Pikachu had no comment, he enjoyed the ride.

Ash looked down the hall he saw the bench Misty was sitting the doors of her neighbors, plants and pictures of Pokémon playing on the wall.



“Misty just invited us into her room, come on Ash let’s go” said Brock.

Ash, Brock, and Misty went into her room after many complaints from Misty about Ladies first and how it was her hotel room. Once inside togepi squealed in delight to see Pikachu again. The room was fairly big one bed, a spacious bathroom, and a great view of the beach. There were pictures of Misty and togepi out on beach enjoying the water and building sandcastles. There was a book with a heart on the cover on the stand near Misty’s bed.

“Hey Misty what’s this?” Ash said picking up a book.

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  • Zach...thats me
    September 19, 2007
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    that was really funny and the book lol great job!


  • Pudding-zilla silver member
    September 16, 2007

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    GREAT

    you have a great story idead. nice plot, nice....everything. keep up your wonderul writing. I wish i could writeas well as you. you are very very talented. keep up your wonderful writing. Again, you are a wonderful writer, who needs to keep writing. don't ever give up. you should send this into publisheres try to get them to publish it! You can improve by well i dont see any thing you have to im prove on. keep up you awesome writing. keep it up. oh by the way you do not know me. I am evalyn. you rock at writing. you really really really really rock! well dont let anyone put you down. keep writing. great job!


  • gamewinner
    September 14, 2007
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    great first story. I cant believe they had to walk to the 12th story

    beginning: 4, ending: 5, characters: 5.