Angel Of Betrayal chpt. 7

Emily woke the next day,in agony, as though a million little flames danced upon her body, not carefully, just blatantly hurting her for the fun of it. Paimon was crushed beneath her naked body, which was glowing red hot, like a sunburn, from the excruciating heat of hell. Paimon is squeaking, but you can't make out the words because Emily's body is covering him completely, she laughs and gets up.

"You bitch, you stole me away from my master!! You, You-",Paimon says, angrily.

Emily laughs,"Stole you? don't make me laugh, I saved you, if Satan had gotten to you after i had escaped you'd be in a pain so agonizing and eternal pain."

Her morbid thoughts seep into Paimon's brain, the fear sinks into the deepest part of his demonic hear and though Paimon squeaks loudly, as if in protest, he knows she speaks the truth about Satan's cruelness.

"Come now squeaky, we must find my Lizzy, I'm sure Arius has her", her eyes darken at this,"That cowardly bastard!! If he has hurt one hair on her head i swear on god's grave I'll obliterate him!" she growls angrily, the though of Lizzy being in pain killing Emily on the inside.

Paimon nods, but he has a secret,a secret that no one else but Arius knows, and Emily knows he knows more than he's telling. But for the time being she just ignores him, Lizzy is more important than anything to her at the moment.
She puts a collar on Paimon, who protests loudly.

"I will not wear this collar!!", says Paimon, his ego deflating rapidly, which is enough hot air to fill a good few hot air balloons, trust me i know.

"you're my new pet now", she says, and as she says that Paimon bites her leg. It takes a moment for it to register to Emily...

She screams, the pain on top of her burns more than she expected, then drops Paimon, and he bounds off into the bushes, leaving Emily to search for her beloved Lizzy all alone.

She heads off, scared, truly and completely afraid for someone else's life for the first time in a long time. She had to find her Lizzy, she had promised her mom she would, she wasn't going to disappoint the fallen angel, mother of Lizzy, and follower of Emily.

Meanwhile, Lizzy and Arius are arguing, as if the were friends, about Emily and her predicament.

"Emily is a good person Arius!! She is!", Lizzy whines, Arius holding her in his lap,"You have to save her! Please Arius, i know you're good, i know you won't let him hurt her, please?"

Arius shakes his head,"It would blow my cover, it's much too risky Lizzy, be happy you are safe, have faith in your Emily",he says as if talking about Emily left a bitter taste in his mouth.

Lizzy starts to sob uncontrollably, crying as if Emily had died, just knowing Emily and she would never see each other again. How wrong she was....

Emily is running, running as fast as her burnt legs would take her, running to her house, to grab some clothes, and then she would track down Arius. She would get Lizzy back, she must!!

she trips over a ledge, and as soon as her eyes focus she spots Lizzy, in Arius's lap, just before she collided with the ground.
Lizzy struggles away from Arius and runs to Emily, tears streaming down chubby round cheeks.

"Emily, Emily?!?!" Lizzy cries out. She touches Emily's searing hot flesh and lets out a yelp of surprise and horror.

"What's wrong with her Arius?" Lizzy chokes out, trying not to cry any more, for the sake of Emily, the woman she cares for very much.

Arius shakes his head as if to tell Lizzy to be quiet.

"You bastard!!" Emily howls,"If you've laid a hand on her-!"

Lizzy hugs Emily, cutting off the last words dying on her lips. Emily sits up and wraps her arms tightly around Lizzy, near tears, so happy to see the girl alive and apparently well. Her emotions were so uncontainable that it was not until Lizzy spoke up that Emily realized she had stopped breathing.

"Arius.... He isn't a bad guy....", Lizzy says quietly, enjoying the womans affection, though slightly embarrassed as she thought about Emily's naked body being pressed so eagerly to her, Emily looks at Lizzy quizzically and there looks at Arius as though her was a god, a god that she would forever be indebted to. She hated that thought...

"Thank... You....", Emily chokes out as the tears well up in her eyes, her throat so tight she can barely speak, he face red from heat,"for taking care of her...."

Arius nods, he doesn't know how to respond, his heart aching in his shiny red chest, his eyes glued to Emily's naked body, so perfect, so beautiful... NO! he mustn't think that way, but he wants he so bad, no, he has to leave. He knows he should go away, he knows he shouldn't bother his Emily, for she hated men, all men, even an incubus couldn't charm her, though a succubus was a completely different story. She had a thing for women, he couldn't bother his poor Emily... The woman he was so protective and possessive of...

But dear god he loved her.....!

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  • TheUnholyProtector
    October 4, 2007

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    really good

    i really liked it, i don't see anything wrong with it, but i think you should add a little comedy in the fact Emily is naked like she screams at Arius to turn around as she grabs a towel or something.


  • AngelOfTheDawn
    September 17, 2007

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    Cool, few spelling mistakes but everyone's done that.
    I like the side of Arius you showed here protecting Emily. Nice twist in the plot so far.
    Just awesome, I cant wait for the next one