Thirteen
My age of which I am
Thirteen
The number of images I see
Thirteen deaths
Thirteen lies
Thirteen loves
Thirteen mouths speaking words of hate
Thirteen pros
Thirteen cons
Thirteen lines
Thirteen
Number of Nothings
A contest entry
- Conversations with my 13 year old self... by artemis the hunter.
190 points, ended October 26, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congrats Kaitlin, on your trophy in your contest (: It was well deserved, as this is really good! I like it, seriously. You made me wish Iwas thirteen again ):
Lol.
Good job..
xox
-Kevan
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I think poems are harder to write, so I think you have done a great job on this.
Good luck in the contest.
Sarah.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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That is a fantastic poem to only be 13 lines. This is exactly the kind of thing I am looking for in this contest! Thank you for entering and good luck!
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