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Platinum droplet
Earthbound in a living pool
Screams to be let free
In a list
A contest entry
- If you want to see a contest - look @ it, not the tittle by NinjaMegami.
160 points, ended May 31, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ohhh I like,
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very original + unique.
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Thank you so much for the gold.
I'm glad you liked it.
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you have a way with words. especially since this was so... short. but i like it. nice job
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Thank you. And yes, it is short, that's why it's a haiku lol.
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Wait forgot the clappy hands.
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Yay for clappy hands!
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Clappy hands are good!
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This was really good! I liked it a lot....of course I love all of your work but this was was absolutely breathtaking! Andrew sometimes I wonder if you are really my age, because obviously you have a talent far greater than mine.
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lol, thanks. But yeah, I'm only fifteen lol.
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Yeah and I turn 15 in a few weeks....but still you are way better than me...granted I have a certain knack for comedy apparently. I suppose that's something to be proud of.
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Hey Andrew!!!
Guess what?
I'm mad at you now.
How come everyone on this site has to be better at poetry than me???
Okay. Anyway. I love this. It was fantastic, Andrew. Really. You did wonderful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
lots of love,
Tay
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Noe there's a haiku. it has mysticism and a wonderful feel to it! Very powerful and stunning visual!
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