I saw a very sad horse

one day i was saw a sad horse i aksed her whats the matter and she said i cant find my baby horse she has wandred of somewhere and im worried he is only 6 months i really cant go find her cause i need to look after his sister joey so can you go look for me please sure max said so he went to where the horse was last seen he saw tracks going in the forest that is the scary forest so max went in the forest he was not afraid and he saw the baby horse in a cage so he carefully got him out and took him back to his mum next his sister woke up and said where have you been he said we were playing tag sister and she fell back asleep again and then his mum was so happy to see him and she always made sure to watch him were ever he went and when he gets older he will be the leader of the whole horses and he will be called stallen of the wind.

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