I never felt the bite but I sure can feel the venom1
no she doesn't have fangs shes got eyes with poison in them2
I had decided never to fall again3
but I was inside her grasp before I knew what would Begin4
I'm so easy for her to control like a puppet on a string5
the fact than I'm aware of it is just the saddest thing6
round and round I go in this twisted game of lies7
this game I can not win I'll never get the prize8
still I wouldn't change a thing nope not in any way9
I'd endure the fires of hell if she gave me one more day10
she's a pain in the ass at least at times it seems11
but there are times I'm with her that can not be matched by dreams12
I know I'm to blame for every piece of this shattered heart13
but I feel that she is worth it worth every little part14
now since I've gone and written this and laid my soul to bare15
I'll let you in on a secret of which I've become aware16
I keep chasing the impossible hoping one day I'll see 17
that love is just a funny game the good lord plays on me18
Author notes
I hope this qualifies I didn't have any other ideas!
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Comments
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I like this a lot! I liked your rhyming scheme, too. Not many people can rhyme every line together. Well, I know I can't anyway. This was amazing. My favorite part I would say is "I never felt the bite but I sure can feel the venom no she doesn't have fangs shes got eyes with poison in them I had decided never to fall again but I was inside her grasp before I knew what would Begin". Great write, and keep up the great work!
~DaNa~
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This is a poem, right? Uh. This is a short story cotnest.
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really great write you sone well i enjoyed rerading it very much and yes God seems to be comedian at times but he is wiser anyways great write.
Pendragon
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