"Hi Randi. How's it going?" I asked as I came into the room we shared. It was a rectangular room with bunk beds, a large closet with double doors with drawers built along the sides, and a desk. Randi was at the desk studying.1
Looking up from the book she was reading she said, "Oh, pretty well I guess. I'm about done with this homework. How was your Algebra test?"2
"I think I aced it." We were about half way through the semester. Saint Monica's Dorm housed about 400 freshmen girls. It was one of the taller buildings on campus, 10 stories. We were on the seventh floor. Everything in our room was painted a cream color. Mine was the top bunk. I put my books on the shelf in the closet and sat on Randi's bed.3
"Math comes easy for you," said Randi with envy. Randi removed the band from her hair and shook her head letting her brown hair fall loosely covering her deep dark blue eyes. She moved her bangs clear of her face brushing them with her hand to the right. She had a rather odd expression.4
"I wish I read as fast as you," I told her. We were about the same size, slender and average height, but my hair was blonde and my eyes hazel. My hair was parted in the middle and we both had long hair.5
"You just need to read more, that will make you faster," said Randi and she paused. "You know I love you?"6
"I love you, too."7
"I don't mean just as friends."8
"You're not going gay on me?" I asked suddenly feeling uncomfortable.9
"No, not gay, but bi maybe."10
I didn't know what to say for a moment. Then I said, "I'm straight." as though it was an accusation.11
"Haven't you ever thought about sex with another woman?"12
"Not really. I've considered the idea and completely rejected it."13
"I hope this doesn't hurt our friendship, Paige"14
"No, I don't think that it will."15
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That was the beginning. Though I had never seriously considered same sex relations before, I found that I began thinking about it. At first the idea was repugnant and horrified me. Gradually I found that I had homosexual thoughts more and more often. I would also admire my own body and sometimes play with myself. I would imagine having sex with men and with women. 17
I had a boyfriend and sex with him was good, though we didn't have sex often. With the restrictions of school and going home for the weekends, we had sex about once every two or three weeks. He had been my only sexual partner. I didn't tell him that I had started fantasizing about having sex with women. I told no one.18
Coming back from dinner at Couch Cafeteria near the end of the semester, I couldn't get sex off my mind. I was obsessed with it. Randi was lying on her bed reading and both of us were wearing t-shirts and shorts. Of course, I had seen her in as little as a bra and panties, but neither of us had been completely naked in front of the other. I wanted to do some experimenting.19
"Let's kiss," I told her.20
She looked surprised for a moment, then set her book on the floor and stood up facing me. She looked me in the eyes, smiling. Resting her hands gently around my neck, we touched lips. Our lips parted and I opened my mouth. Our tongues met and danced together, timidly at first and then eagerly. I wrapped my arms around her waist embracing her tightly. We kissed for several minutes.21
She sat on her bed and asked, "Well, what do you think?"22
"It's not the same as kissing Richard, your mouth is softer and in a way sweeter than his. I like it."23
"You've been sucking on mints!" Randi said laughing.24
"I wanted my breath to be fresh," I returned giggling.25
"Well, is that it? Is that all you want to do?"26
I really hadn't planned it all out, but I did plan to go further. I sat down beside Randi to her right and I started to kiss her again, but as we neared each other, we started laughing. After a couple of minutes we regained our composure and initiated the kiss again more successfully. During the series of kisses, we kissed for about twenty minutes. I was surprised how much I enjoyed the sensation of my nipples as they brushed against her chest and the warmth and dampness in the recess between my legs.27
"Shall we do more?" asked Randi.28
"Yes," I said with some trepidation as this was my first experience with another girl.29
"You're certain? I don't want to feel that I'm taking advantage of you."30
"Yes, I don't want to stop."31
Taking my t-shirt in both hands, she pulled it up, over my head, and off. I was wearing a light weight white bra. Randi removed it. Gently she kissed each nipple and then caressed them with her hands. She pulled off her own shirt and slipped off her bra. Our breasts we both medium in size, but her areolas and nipples were larger than mine. Her areolas were also darker. She took my hands and placed them on her breasts. Carefully I felt of them and squeezed them lightly. I felt her nipples between my thumbs and index fingers. There was something exciting about it. Her mounds were soft and warm. "Go ahead, kiss them if you like," Randi said to me.32
I kissed, gently caressed, and sucked her breasts and nipples. She began massaging and licking my breasts. Although it was not unlike what my boyfriend might do, there was a different kind of excitement I couldn't quite explain. Randi pushed me back on the bed so that I was lying on my back. Running her hands on the inside of my legs toward my vulva, she reached and unzipped my shorts. I was both apprehensive and anxious as she slid them down my legs and off. Goose bumps formed over my body as she placed her hands inside my panties and slipped them from me. I was feeling embarrassed as my pussy came into view. The air in the room suddenly felt cooler.33
Randi laid on top of me and began kissing me deeply with her legs inside mine. I tried to respond eagerly. She kissed my neck and began licking her way down my chest between my breasts and arrived at my navel where she sucked for several minutes. It was a unique sensation I'd not experienced before. Going further south, she skipped my pussy and went to the inside of my left knee. I felt her tongue moving along the inside of my thigh toward my twat. Almost tickling me, she circled lightly around my out labia. Opening me up with her fingers, she began chewing my inner lips and clit. I was nearly beside myself in pain and pleasure. With her tongue, she penetrated me. She seemed to enjoy my flavor. Still tormenting my clit with her fingers, I felt my first release and quickly started to build toward my next climax. "Oh God, Randi! Easy!" I groaned. It was nearly more than I could stand. My pussy was wet and warm. I had another orgasm.34
She finished eating me out and found my G-spot with her middle finger and began stimulating it. I was nearly out of my mind from the agony and the pleasure. She alternated squeezing each of my tits painfully with her left hand, but it was arousing to me. I climaxed again and again. Randi got up. "Don't you want me to do you?" I asked her surprised.35
"I'm getting my vibrator," she said.36
"I didn't know you had one."37
"It's a girl's best friend. You can always count on it."38
She got a white vibrator, which was about a foot in length and an inch and a quarter wide coming down to a gradual point. She turned it on and it made a low pitch hum. It heated as well as vibrated I realized as Randi shoved it deeply inside me. It had horizontal ridges on the sides and she plunged it as far inside as it would go and pulled it almost out in a repetitive fashion. She was right; every woman needed one. I came again. I had never had so many orgasms. She was able to force most of the vibrator inside me.39
We kissed as she fucked me with the vibrator. When she was done, I pulled her denim shorts off, and then her panties. Her pubic hair was shaved neatly into a triangular shape above her vulva. More of her inner labia protuded on her than with me. She laid on her back on the bed and spread her legs. I opened and examined her pussy. It bothered me that it was so close to the anus. Her clitoris shaft, hood, urethral orifice and vaginal opening were clearly defined. I began by stimulating her clit. Her pussy was ugly and beautiful at the same time. I was repulsed and attracted. She was already damp.40
I steeled myself and began chewing on her inner lips. She moaned in satisfaction. Still playing with her clit, I penetrated her vaginal vestibule with my tongue. The flavor of her cream was some salty, but reminded me some of soda water. I liked the taste. I got more and more into it and started enjoying the cunnilingus. I tried to duplicate all the things she had done for me. 41
We cuddled after we finished making love and I asked her, "Was I okay?"42
"You were great, Paige."43
"Thanks."44
"How was it for you?"45
"Marvelous!" I assured her.46
"You're not just saying that, are you?"47
"No, I really mean it. It was great."48
Usually from then on Randi and I slept together in the lower bunk. I still had my boyfriend, but it certainly changed my perspective. I didn't know what would happen when Randi and I stopped being roommates, but for the time being, we were lovers.49
Author notes
Option 9
A contest entry
- What A Gay Contest [take 2] by Hate.
340 points, ended October 4, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Depth [Let me feel the pressure, Let me drown in your thoughts] by Amnesty-.
295 points, ended November 30, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
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100 points, ended October 26, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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100 points, ended November 11, 2007, 3 entries
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100 points, ended November 12, 2007, 4 entries
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450 points, ended July 14, 13 entries
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Very interesting. Written well and nice descriptions.
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Thank You
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I'm very pleased that you like this story. What types of stories do you generally like to read? And to write?
Andy
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Honestly I love to read erotica and I write a bit of it myself. I will read just about anything though, I love poetry and always the sappy romance stories.
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I absolutely loved the story...but being honest when i say i hated the picture at the beginning. Really great read though. Thanks for entering my contest. =CC
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Sorry you didn't like the picture. I'm very pleased that you love the story. Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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This was well written in a grammatical sense. Some of your technical terminology threw me off a bit, as well as paige's perception of Randy's body. All around, i enjoyed it. THanks for entering. Durian.
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I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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I love it but at the same time some of the words i didnt understand myself.


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Andy
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quite arousing but a little out there. still it's a theme that non one can argue with, it's definitely hot
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I really like this - reading your work I could learn a few things - being I just started within the last two months writing short stories. Bravo excellent write - best of luck in the contest


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Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it.
Oh Gosh! I've probably got a lot of stuff you wouldn't like. What sort of stories do you like? I can try to direct you around those you wouldn't like.
Andy
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Wow, I can see I'm not the only one who likes this story with the amount of golds and trophy's you've got.
Good job on the story.
Good luck in the contest.

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I also hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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k just got back from the bathroom lol. this was soooo hot! really good description. Good job and good luck in the contest!


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Glad you like this story. Kind of fun trying to write two female characters. I hope it was convincing. Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I really appreciate it.
Andy
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Wow. I think you just converted me.
My friend and I both actually liked it. It was really good. Like something that would actually happen. thans for entering and good luck!

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So you've been converted, that easily!
I'm very pleased that you and your friend like this story. Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it.
I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Wow! Can't believe I hadn't came across this story of yours till now. I really did enjoy it and you certainly have erotica down in it. The descriptions you used was amazing. I need to point my friend to this one. She would love it!


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Thanks Joann
I'm very pleased that you like this. What sort of stories do you like? I have another story similar to this which has a vampire in it. I can get you the link if you like. Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause.
Andy
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I agree with whichcraft. However, I did find it highly erotic: Though I am straight myself, I have never ruled out the possibility that my true love might, one day, be a woman. To this day, I have never been attracted to one, but I have, admittedly been curious as to what another woman's body, that's not my own, looks like... The whole college-experimentation thing is a bit cliche, but other than that, this was a great read! Well done!
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I guess just about any relationship is cliche anymore these days. Ho hum. It was a new approach for me as a writer.
I have a friend with three children who divorced her husband and had a live-in lesbian lover. I think she is bi as much as lesbian. It made an unusual family unit, but I guess even that might be cliche.
I've considered being bi, and I believe that I could become so; but I am so straight oriented that it would require determination. I have thought about trying to write a gay(m/m) erotic piece, but so far I haven't. I've written some trios, two females and a male.
I'm glad that you found this highly erotic. I'm also pleased that you like this story. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Andy
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It was a well written story, but it's just that the college girls getting it on with each other is just so overdone. Maybe it would have been more interesting if you approached it in a different angle.
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Andy
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Good Erotic Story
Kind of jumpy to begin with. It could use some better transitions in the paragraphs. The sentences are sort of choppy.
Dialogue could use a bit of work, but it isn't too bad.
"I said with some trepidation as the was my first experience with another girl." I think you meant "this" instead of "the".
"I getting my vibrator"...I think it's supposed to be "I'm".
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I made the corrections to the word mistakes. It will probably be a while before I get to a rewrite of this story, but I appreciate the corrections and the suggestions. I'm glad that you felt it is a good erotic story.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and your detailed comment. I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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This was actually really well written. I'm not a huge fan of girl on girl but here you made it work. Congratulations on all those trophies too. Four gold on one story; that's a pretty cool aclomplishment. Anyways, keep up the awesome work and best of luck in my contest.
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I've thought about writing a guy on guy story, but so far it is only a notion and not a reality. I read one by Manic Black that was quite good. I hope this story fares okay in your contest. Thanks for hosting and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
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I think you just converted me. Which will disappoint my mom, but what can you do? This was about the hottest story I ever read. The ending was a bit weak, the way it just dropped off but other than that- You got the action dead on! Good luck!

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I'm very pleased that you like this story. How would you suggest I end it? If you like f/f, I know a story which is even hotter. So, you've been converted?
I think the girls in this story are bi. Thanks for reading, commenting, and applauding.
Andy
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damn that was fuckin hot i really liked this imma need a cold shower now

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Thanks Mercedes
Very nice of you to stop by and give me a read. Thanks for commenting and all the applause. I appreciate it. I'm very pleased that you like this story. It was fun stepping out of my male shoes and writing from the point of view of two young women. Thanks again.
Andy
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HOT!!!!
Ummm, this was so erotic and fun to read. I loved it, brought images to mind. I thought it had a really great flow, and the proper words you used made it even more of a pleasure to read.

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Thanks again!
Thanks for reading me again and all the applause. I certainly like it. I'm glad you like this story. It was fun to write. What kind of stories do you like to read and write?
Andy
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Three applause times a million. That was so well written that it puts my stories to shame! I really loved it. Good luck in the contest!


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Thanks brittie
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Andy
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astounding.. hot..steamy..gawd im drooling at the thought no wait Im feeling more then hot right now.... good luck xoxox


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Andy
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This was amazingly well written.
As Meakalu said, I didn't really expect anyone to enter for this part of my contest. I am glad you did.
Although it did technically break a rule- the vivity of it was definately more than PG-13.
Still amazing. It didn't describe fully what I asked for, but then again, it was a prewrite. It couldn't fit perfectly.
Thank you for entering, excellent job.
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Andy
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WOW!!!
That's all I can say, WOW! It was just what I was looking for in this contest. I loved it. I honestly didn't think anyone would enter in this option, but I'm extreamly glad you did. I could feel the passion, the uncertantly, the unknowingness (Is that a word?) but yeah, PERFECT!!! Thanks for entering.
Best of luck,
Meaky

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Thanks Meaky
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Andy
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Very Good. There was a good pace to the story and showed the conflict the main character had with her roommate. As well as within herself. Then finally gave into her curious desires, just to satisfy her own wonderment. Wonderful write.
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Thanks Michael
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Andy
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Hmmm, I liked it. It was a good read. The flow and pace of the whole thing was just right. Not too rushed and not too slow.

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Andy
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Very nice! Only I wouldn't "chew".


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