HELP! I need Help! Why doesn’t anyone answer me? Why am I in such pain? What did I do? I don’t deserve this. Why can’t I see anyone? Why do I feel like I’m being burned alive? PLEASE! SOMEONE HELP ME… I’m dying, I’m crying, I’m desperately trying. I want out. I can’t shout. I scream, but no sound comes out. It’s dark. I’m lonely. I want someone to talk to. Just a friend…1
“SHUT UP!! YOU’RE IN HELL. I WON YOU. YOU BELONG TO ME. WELCOME TO HELL, FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE. YOU NEVER GAVE YOUR LIFE TO THAT STUPID MAN THEY CALL “JESUS.” YOU LIVED FOR ME. THANK YOU. THANK YOU FOR DOING DRUGS. THANK YOU FOR FIGHTING. THANK YOU FOR HATING. OH, REMEMBER THAT RUMOR YOU STARTED ABOUT LITTLE JOHNNY AND YOU CAUSED HIM TO KILL HIMSELF? THANK YOU FOR THAT ALSO. HE’S DOWN HERE WITH ME AS WELL. CAN’T YOU TELL? I DON’T CARE ABOUT YOU. I HATE YOU. YOU’RE A DEMON NOW AND FOREVER MORE. YOU WILL NOT EAT, SLEEP, OR EVEN TALK EVER AGAIN. YOU WILL BE FOREVER TORMENTED IN THIS PIT OF FIRE. WHAT? WHAT IS THAT? I CAN’T HEAR YOU! MUAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! MUAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! YOU CAN’T SPEAK. YOU’RE A PIECE OF GARBAGE. HAVE FUN.”2
Now I begin to realize that there is a God. All that stuff I learned in Church is real. Why didn’t I believe? Why didn’t I receive? Oh no, this is my punishment. I don’t want this. I can’t take this. Please, stop tormenting me. I need help, I want out, and I want to shout. But I can’t. I can’t even hear myself. If only I had a second chance. One more time to believe and receive Jesus. Oh how I wish I could go and tell everyone hell is real. You don’t wanna go there. It’s treacherous. It’s painful. It’s lonely. It’s hot and cold and clammy. It’s dark. I can’t even see me. I’m in hell. I am crying desperately. The pain, the agony, it is so immense. It doesn’t stop, ever. Why? Why did I mock Him? Why did I make fun of those who did believe? Why did I do drugs and sell them? Why did I beat people up? Why did I start that rumor? If only I could change the past, have one final chance. I would never have said that about little Johnny. I would be his best friend. But I’m too late. Never again to be happy. Never to see my family again. Oh, my mom. How miserable she must be. The pain she feels inside. The emptiness of never seeing me. My dad, he knew I didn’t believe. He knew where I was headed. He only tried to love me and teach me the truth. He started teaching me when I was a youth. But I never listened to Him. I left them in the end. What about my younger brother? We were so close. I took him everywhere. I bought him toys and candy and ice cream. I hung out with him. I took him to school. I came to class with him so I could meet his friends and teachers. But not now, I’m in hell. He’ll never see me again because he’ll be in heaven. Oh how I could just reach up and grab him and hug him one final time and say bye, I love you little brother. What about my sister? We never liked each other. We fought all the time. I wish I had the chance to apologize to her before I died. Never did we become friends. Oh how guilty she must feel for fighting with me. I wish our last words could have been “I love you” instead of those nasty words. If I could just hold my family one more time, I would look them in the eyes and say I’m sorry. I would tell them how much I love them. Oh mom, dad, sister, my brother, my friends, I’ve left them all. Never again to hold, hug, or talk to, or laugh with. No one to share my thoughts or my pain with. I’m alone now and forever. What am I gonna do. Mooooom!! Daaaaaaaaaad!! Pleeease, Save me!!! ….3
Oh my!! What a nightmare. That was so real, I felt the pain and agony. Oh man, that was so scary, I have to make some changes. Thank you God for waking me up. 4
God, can we talk?5
Listen, if you are there, please hear my cry. I’m on my knees God, asking for your forgiveness. I go to Church, but I’ve always hated you. I made fun of everyone. I picked on everyone. No one likes who I am or who I’ve become. I do drugs, I sleep around, I watch pornography, and I fight. Lord, please forgive me. This nightmare was so real. Because Hell is where I’m headed. But God, I don’t want to go there. I want to go to Heaven. I want to be with you. I want to change my life. So God, as I kneel right here before You, I receive you into my heart. I believe Jesus died and rose again on the third day. I believe He came to earth, lived a perfect life, all for me. I cling to the wondrous cross. I bow before you. I lift my voice to you. Father, please forgive me. Help me change my life. Help me to live right for you. I give my drug addiction to you. I give my pornography addiction to you. I will no longer have sex until I am married. Oh God, I am so unworthy, but your word says:6
“For God so loved the world that He gave His one and only Son that whosoever believeth in Him, shall not perish, but have everlasting life.”7
I receive you and I want to change my life. God, for the first time in my life, I feel your presence. I feel so, umm… wow, so HAPPY and JOYFUL! Never have I felt so light. So happy. Thank You Father! Thank You Jesus! Wow God, its 2 am. I am gonna go wake everyone up and tell them that the Prodigal Son has been saved and has come home. Now I will live forever with you and you with me. Thank You for loving me and forgiving me and saving me. Lord I give this night to you and in your hands I lay my life down. In Jesus’ Name I pray, 8
AMEN9
Jesus’ Word says in: Romans 12:2a- “Do not conform any longer to the pattern of 10
this world, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind.11
God says, “I LOVE YOU12
The question is; DO YOU?13
Author notes
I was awoken around 2 am this morning by God and so He had me write this. I hope it really makes you think as you read it.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Its so Powarful And ITll rele Help Nonbeleivers WIth There Loss of Faith. I dont See How Anyone Wont Bleve in God I Mean Hes Right Their!!!
Ur Sister In Christ
Kerri -
Hey, this is absolutly awesome. It is so true. So many people don't realize and it is hard to realize it. I guess really until you come face to face with things and realize what this life is all about. Because we are givin the chioce everyday to live for the lord jesus christ or the enemy. And He has a chioce he love us or he could not but he chooses to love us no matter what. thats why he died for are sins. He put himself through hell for us. And there are just so many people who don't understand that. I didn't until I really faced my problems. But I really love this it is great work.
Janet -
I am constantly faced everyday with the beauty of the vision of God. I've turned towards that warming thought of a creator and wanted so desperately to believe he was there and that I wasn't alone, but I found myself at a loss. I couldn't make myself believe and without belief, there was no love. I turned away from him many times because I felt like a hypocrite, wanting to love God, but never feeling his existence. I almost wonder if I'm missing something that other's see. Most of the time I'm scared into beliveing from this exact fear, the fear of hell and never seeing those I love again. I read the bible everyday and I'm hoping to one day find something to push my emotions over the edge and into God's hands.
~Chelsey~
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I would be lying if I said just good job. This piece was excellent. I shivered when I read it. Good Job.
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This is absolutly wonderful. This is beautiful, And you put ittogether perfectly, I like how there is 2 conflicting stories. And i like how you make it seem your alive after youv dies. I have something similar to that but not as brlilliant as this. Lol. You always do such a wonderful job and even if its a sad peice you bring it uplifting. You have a way with words. You could make a lemon sweet.
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Thank You for reading this!! Yea, this is a story that I just hope those out there will read and realize that they will suffer and burn forever in the lake of fire if they don't come to repentance. Just keep praying and stay strong! God Bless You my friend!! 
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Hey there!! Thank You so much my friend for reading this and for your comment. I know it is a hard thing to understand how people can go through life without believing in the Lord. But that is why we must stand strong in the face of all adversity and persecution Be strong my friend Keep on Praising the Lord!! God Bless You my friend!!
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Its so sad. Its so true to though. Creepy!
grace -
This was AMazing! No, still is amazing! This, to me, held so many different emotions. Like, the people who go to hell, suddenly want to go to heaven? To me it's sad, though they had their own choice of believing or not. I'm glad that the main character in this story was only expiriencing a nightmare, or I might of seriously started crying. I'm happy that he/she turned to God. God is and awesome, wonderful God! This was great! God bless you, and have a beautiful day!
~Peace~
Braveheart
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Yes, God is truly awesome. I believe in the quote I wrote that "The Rose is God's signature to Mankind." He reveals His character in the beauty of the nature He created. I had posted a article about a rainbow. You can read what I posted at the following website; http://www.storywrite.com/story/507912 I love to write.
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Oh no, not at all. I don't have dreams like this. I have mostly peaceful dreams cuz I always pray before I go to bed and ask the Lord to watch over me while I sleep and while I dream. Although I may not always have peaceful, I never have horrirfying dreams or nightmares. That is a blessing and I thank God for always being with me. God is just so awesome and amazing!! I love the Lord with all my heart!! Thanks for commenting Donna!! Aint God just so awesome??
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Did you personally experience this nightmare? If so, God awoke you from that horrible dream. He is near you and will never leave you!
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excellent
Woa! that was awesome!
God says, “I LOVE YOU
The question is; DO YOU? <<< very good question, I've grown up and church and so have most of my friends; and that is a very good question too. Even though we may sit on the pews and get evolved... most of the time we really don't want to be there. But the real thing is... Do we honostly love Him in return. That was excellent! Nice write. -
Dude, this is increadible! It's a real eye opener. Suddenly I have the urge to quit complaining about everything I see do something good with my life. Life is more fragile than it seems. You could die at any moment, and then what, Heaven or Hell? This story really brings out the seariousness over the salvation or the damnation of a person's soul.
Tommorrow is never a garentee, and this story helped me to remember that.
Another thing I liked about the story was that even though the narrator was such a terrible sinner, God still forgave him/ her and turned his/ her suffering into blissful joy. Only God's love can do such a thing.
This is a great write! Thanks for helping me to remember how fragile life is and that God's love can work maricles.
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i liked the style, the different points of view. however. i do have grudge against the traditional "fire and brimstone" view of hell...personally i view hell as the state of being away from him (and that is painful in itself); of staying in your grave.
seeing the character turn around towards the end was interesting. however...i thought that maaaybe loosening on the physical pain in this piece would be a benefit, especially to your cause...as it might drive people away.
all in all, not a bad write. (inspiration comes at the oddest times, doesnt it?)
love,
-kiera
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Wow this is amazing. 2 am he woke you up to write this?! wow ,well even at 2 am you did a darn good job! well i've got a lot to do so i can't post much, but I wanted to comment and leave a good note saying that you are an amazing writer and I admire the emotion and meaning behind your words.
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We live in a sinful and sick world. We live in a world where there is murder, rape, terrorism, violence, and much more. God created us all to worship Him. We broke that bond when sin entered the world and allowed evil to overtake us. We no longer have that perfect one way communication to God. So that's why He sent Jesus Christ here to earth to be an example to us and to live a life like us only to die on the Cross for our sins. Now Jesus did nothing but love everyone, heal the sick, made the blind to see, caused the lame to walk, healed the leprosy's, raised the dead, saved lives. Jesus loved us soo much that He gave His life up for YOU and ME. The blood of Jesus that was shed on Calvary is what covers us when we receive Jesus. God can't look down on sin, so if you are not covered by the blood of Jesus, He can't look down on you. God doesn't cause us to suffer, its our own choice to turn from God and allow Satan to cause all these bad things to happen to people. Why blame it on God? Its not reasonable. God is a God of love and mercy. Satan is the destroyer of people and the hater of the world. He is out there to deceive people and cause them to stumble and turn from God. You can blame God all you want, and in the end, you will either choose to believe in Him or not, but you will face Him one day. Everyone will. So in other words, those who do not believe in Jesus, which means you are denying God, you will not inherit eternal life with Him. Its our own choice, we make our own decisions in life. Just like you make the decision to not believe in God, thats your choice, but you will be the one faced with the consequences. What would it prove if God made us love Him and made us worship Him?? That would mean we would have to, but He wants us to do it on our own will. Just remember, everything you do here on earth is your choice. You choose the mistakes you make and you choose the consequences. God doesn't want anyone to go to Hell, He wants everyone to come to the saving knowledge of Jesus Christ. God is patient, and He is waiting for you to believe in Him and worship Him. We choose our eternity, Heaven or Hell, which one do you choose?
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What kind of God allows his children to burn and be tormented forever? Wouldn't it make more since to destroy them and Satan along with his evil angels all at once so that sin may never harm anyone again? Wouldn't a God of love do that rather than torture them for all eternity? How could I love a God who allows my grandfather to burn right now. I couldn't. And didn't your verse, John 3:16 say that “For God so loved the world that He gave His one and only Son that whosoever believeth in Him, shall not perish, but have everlasting life.”
Doesn't that say that only those who believe in Him will have 'everlasting life'? Meaning that those who didn't would be destroyed forever?
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Interesting...
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Good writing, but about the same old Guilt Trip that most religions teach. I like the laugh, "Muahahaha".
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wow this is incredible. You have such a talent for writing and a sort of prophetic voice. Well done..... please do keep writing and listening to God
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