Ally walked briskly. She was already ten minutes late for Technolagy and she knew that would not be good. Whats the Proffessor going to say? She thought to herself. She was almost about to open the door to the big room when she noticed the five hundred students in the class. I'll just go tomarow she thought. He is just going to pass out the syllabus and say Hello class I'm blah blah blah.
She peered in the classroom through the window. A large whiteboard with wheels read "Mr. Philips" and had various scribbles on it that she could not make out. All around him were various props such as a diagram that read, "computers throughout the ages" and a model featuring the first computer ever made.
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nice interesting start though at this point the posted section is more of just a wramble than anything. there really isnt any story or character developement produced yet. good luck on rounding out your ideas. your writing does have some good potential.
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