Cheery Blossoms - Evil

"Cherry blossoms are beautiful this time of year." the guy at the Plant Galore store told me. I was looking around at different plant stores for varies of plants and trees to plant in my yard. I had just gotten married a couple of months ago and Jeff and i bought a house together. So now we wanted to decorate our dirt yard.

"I don't know." My voice drifted off a bit. The man who was trying to convince me was a crooked smile and yellow teeth. He had a dirt covered checkered shirt on and jeans that were ripped at the knees.

"Look, this plant will change your life!" He glared at me. "I promise you!" He laughed a creepy, high pitched laugh.

I finally agreed just to get him to leave me alone. I picked up the small tree and slowly carried it to the register. The man stopped me. He told me the plant was for free and that I should just go home and plant it now. I thought it was strange for him to say, but I did really just want to get home.

"Whatever," I muttered to myself and walked out to my car. I turned up my radio to my favorite station, 181.1 it played all types of music from France. I took the ten minute ride to my house, thinking of how I could explain to Jeff about this odd guy.

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  • Mitsuki-Sakura
    September 8, 2007

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    This is interesting... I'm wondering what's going to happen. Evilness... free... this comment is really random... but ooh this was a great story all in all. Can't wait for more.


  • Siby Anan
    September 7, 2007
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    Aw man! This was just getting really interesting!

    Write more, write more, write more!

    lols


  • I Dare to Dream
    September 6, 2007

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    Cool. Kinda of a cliffhanger ending, and what's with the mysterious guy? A very good start here, be interested to read some more of this.


    • InMemoryofCharlieJr
      September 6, 2007
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      Thanks!
      I left it there just for now I kinda got a headache so yea. But it will be really good don't worry

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