I am loved
I am tortured
I am a blue-eyed soul.
I am a mother
I am a wife
I am a woman whole.
I want a life
I want a dream
I want them both to be true.
I want a man
I want a husband
I want them through and through.
I need a child
I need a home
I need a white-brick home.
I need a place
To call my own
I need never ever to roam.
A contest entry
- Who are You? What are you? by dNOZ.
225 points, ended October 1, 2007, 11 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Contest of Depressing Poems! by Fervent-Author.
184 points, ended November 22, 2007, 18 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme and Rhythm (ALL POETRY) by ZackTruel.
300 points, ended November 26, 2007, 10 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well, this poem had amazing rhythm and great rhyme. It was pretty simple, but it did have what I was looking for when it came to rhyme and rhythm. Good luck on the contest and keep up the good writing!
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